Heartaches Knocking on Her Door - Comments

I'm seriously addicted to this fan fic! Please update soon!!!!

Beautiful and elegant but extremely painful. I really hope they can work everything out. Please update soon!!!! :D

Ahhhh after reading one chapter I want to literally kill Ville and after another I want to murder Liv ! These two really need to see each others before I.. fuck I'm forgetting I'm reading a fiction hahaha.. but as always, it´s because I'm still amazed by your writing and every little details that you put here and here that makes the difference and the quality of your story. But oh my God, what a tease you are, one second they're close and the other they're not, I just want them to finally meet up.. but it's cool, I'm sure the longer they're apart, the better it will be hehe, I totally trust you with that !

The dramatic irony of it! Really?? :D I thought I had done a so so job on the emotion for this chapter since I tried do focus more on working out what had happened on their lives since the last chapter. I can assure you that the next chapter is gonna have A LOT of emotion and life :P

Ahhh their so close to each other!! I loved this chapter, the emotion was so strong! I love how good you are at making the characters seem real and how you can give the story such raw emotion and give it so much life!!

haha it's a bit annoying right? just avoiding things to such an extent, but don't worry, it'll stop, I assure you

I swear this girl is getting on my nerves i really want them to get back together it's so frustrating lol

Just wanted to start off by saying sorry for this incredibly late reply to all your lovely comments, do know I appreciate each and every one, it's just that after I post I only tend to read the comments right before the next post
thank you for your comments!! <3 <3 <3
@BlackFeather.. I'm so glad it was nerve wracking! It was the climax haha had to be intense. haha eternal suffering is a bit harsh, but I do have a tendency to be cruel :P
@LipsGoBlue Oh no don't cry! (But secretly makes me happy that the chapter was so emotional it almost brought you to tears!)
@JustShrugAtlas heartbreak is exactly what I'm going for! I wish things were that simple to call and talk! In the new chapter things are definitely calmer. thankyouthankyou! intense and beautifully tragic gaah :D I promise not to let go of the heartstrings until the very end!
@Vesper Lestrange gracias :] Ah I know. I didn't edit as much with the last chapter, I'll try to catch the typos this coming chapter. Also, I'm not quite sure I use the commas the way I do, it's really informal and strange, it's just that I use them as pauses, as if I'm speaking directly to you, if that makes sense?
@ducky7 really?? haha I tried hinting a bit, but still wanted it to come as bit of a shock, which it did so yay! tehe I wanted everyone to think I'd kill off Liv, but she's the protagonist haha and this isn't game of thrones :P Oh gosh the songs coming out of something like what happened would be really heart wrenching
@bobobo thank you! things will start getting a little intense now that it's declining action
@Sweet_like_poison Really? I may have to write more scenes where I show both their perspectives. It was pretty difficult going back and writing what Ville thought and felt through that scene since it's easier for me to write Liv's parts. Dramatic but good turn of events?? that is so beautiful, thriller of the heart :) <3 I need new words to say thank you!
@kristi_motionless I'm just building up the tension to when they finally do, cause just imagine how intense that conversation is going to be like!
@aurora616 ah thank you lovely reader!

thank you, gracias, danke, merci!! I look forward to hearing what everyone thinks about the new chapter :D thank you for all the comments they mean so much, especially now that the story is close to done I hope to receive more and will try and be more prompt in replying <3

Really good story! Love it! Keep them coming!

These 2 need to see each other and let everything out!! So sad! I love this story, please update soon!!!!

I really hope that she'll call Ville and talk to him. I hope Ville will calm the fuck down! And I hope that it'll end okay. Your story is very intense and beautifully tragic. I love the way you pull at the heart strings and don't let go. Please update soon! :D

I can't wait to read on! It's lovely and heartbreaking at the same time.

I loved to read the story retelled by Ville , totally understand Liv's behaviour ... and the lost baby was a dramatic turn of events that I wasn't expecting . I need new words to praise your work , this is a beautiful thriller of the heart. :)))

Holy crap! These last few chapters have been so intense but so well written!

What the smurf?!?!?!?! I did not see that one coming! Totally caught me off guard. Really thought you were gonna kill her off. Ha! This will be interesting to see where you go from here. I hope they can reconcile and she will at least let the man apologize.

On a side note, just imagine what kind of song writing this would evoke if it were true...hehehehehe....

Great chapter as usual. I only have a few issues. There were a few typos here and there. Also, it feels like you overuse commas while writing.

Oh my god. I think my heart is broken. I really hope Liv can listen to Ville and accept his apology along with all the truths to come out about their awful situation. Please update soon!!!! :)

I am so close to being in tears right now. I am so heartbroken for these two. But damn this is so good. I can't wait to read more. I hope things turn up for Liv and Ville.

Oh my god. This last chapter... Was just... Wow. It was nerve-wrecking, but so amazing. I do hope that things will get better. I mean, obviously it's going to take time, but I do hope that you won't damn them into eternal suffering. :D

@katherinewheel it honestly makes me so happy hearing that my writing can elicit an emotional response like that! Haha you're reaction is exactly what I want from a reader, and I wanted people reading this last chapter to honestly have no clue whether I would kill off Liv or not
@ilikewalls but I'm so mean! I hope you like what happens in chapter 23! And sorry for the wait
@Death's Love I know I wrote him terrible in this last chapter but of course he feels guilty :P chapter 23 is going to have Ville's POV of the fight! so hopefully that give more insight into his feelings and stuff
@krisit_motionless thank you!! <3 He'll find out in the next chapter! I'm so anxious to see what you and everyone think of how things transpire after the car crash!
@melaniekgut things are just going to get worse! sorry!
@anybodys :/ yes, unfortunately, really look forward to seeing how you react to what happens in the next chapter
@Nymph.Naji haha cliffhangers are the best way to keep readers coming back though!
@Sweet_like_poison I was trying to make Tylers whole sub plot thing kind of a surprise but was also trying to hint at it a little bit, I never know how big to make my hints though. Aw thank you! Most ardently! And you are right, most of the next chapter will be Ville's POV and his whole perspective on the fight as well. No no no! There are far better ones out there! But thank you very much, honestly
@BuryMeInWhite It did! :D It is the turning point, that last chapter was, I guess, the climax. That's exactly what I was hoping people would keep in the back of their mind, 'where does the prologue come in,' even when things were fine and happy, I wanted readers to think, 'but somethings going to go wrong.' I'm hoping no one foresaw what happens next! It's, well everyone knew there would be a crash, but no one knew what the repercussions would be. Haha I hope you survive until the next update!
@Disa616 thank you!! :) lol well your wish is my command, I'm updating now!

You all are so incredible with comments! It means a lot, any comments, long or short, it shows that the story made some sort of impact, you had to say something, and so thank you so much for leaving comments ♥♥