January 24th, 2018 at 08:21pm
greetings from comment swap~~
first off, im going to say this: i wish i could effin write like you! you have such feeling and emotion it literally took my breath away. i was just inspired and bewildered by your dialouge and attention to detail. your an amazing author and i can just pray that one day, ill be as amazing as you.
Wow, you're an amazing writer. You give such good details. This story is very intriguing and drew me in immediately. Can't wait to meet Matt! But you should include more dialogue so you get more of a feel for the characters. Yay for comment swap to bring a good story my way.