Bloodshot Eyes - Comments

The comment swap thingy brought me here. I usually don't read fanfiction, but this was really good!! And it helps that I'm a fan of evanescense. :) You have a great writing style that pulled me in. I did see a few mistakes here and there, but that's easily fixed. Nice work so far and I hope you update soon!

Comment swap brought me here and I'm very glad! This is a good story and I love the first chapter with the background of the desire to be a gymnast. I was instantly drawn in. Your writing style is well developed and I think you've got a great story going here. Good job!

I liked the second chapter. You're very aware of your tenses, which is really good, and Amy's diction is very realistic and relatable. The only criticism I really have is that it was a little too much background and not enough present, (just for this chapter), and it didn't always seem relevant. But whatever, great job :) Also, in case you didn't know, I subscribed ;)

Already I am enjoying this story! The comment swap is always sending me gems of unique stories, and this one is unlike any other I've read. I've NEVER seen an Amy Lee fan fiction, but I already like the way it has started. I have no idea if she really wanted to be a gymnast or anything, but the way you play it off is very nice.

It's a really good start. Keep going!

Wow wow wow! I really love comment swap!!! I'm really glad I found this story because it's really good! You really added a lot of detail and I liked hearing about her wanting to be a gymnast from when she was a little kid and through out the years. It was really cool! Matthew Tuck seems like quite the charmer ;D PLEASE UPDATE. I can't wait to read more!!!!!!!