Oh this is beautiful despite it being about a girl killing a guy but that has no affect on it whatsoever. You’re writing flows so well and I really could picture the scene perfectly and that is what attracts a story to me! Shame it was short because honestly I could have read a whole story about this. The plot seemed deep even if it was a short chapter ;) I do hope you could continue it maybe (I know you’ve finished it but...?) You’re such a good writer and I do hope you consider maybe dragging this out to create something equally as amazing as this!
You’re such a good writer and I do hope you consider maybe dragging this out to create something equally as amazing as this!