Devirgination Studies - Comments

OH MY GOD CHAPTER TWO!!! AHHH!!! I thought the first chapter was pretty hot but after reading chapter two I'm just like UHHH!!! Mmm Chris being all dominant is so fucking hot! I imagine him as a big muscley type guy just hovering over the smaller girl. I would probably be intimidated and hypnotized at the same time. Don't even get me started on those eyes, so beautiful. I am a sucker for blue eyes, I could have easily gotten lost in those baby blues. Anyways, dominant Chris just yummeh! The sex scence was really, really hot and I love all the dirty talk. Oh god and the slapping her breast and the choking really had me going! I love how she stood up to him and told him no, if had been me I would've done it right away, he wouldn't have to ask me twice. He can ravish my body all he wants ;) I love me some rough, dirty sex up against the wall! I laughed when she said she looked like a dalmation, I found it funny for some reason. Need to take another breather before I continue! You and your smut writing skills. *bows* You are my queen wh en it comes to smut. Tell me all your secrets, lend me your skills pretty please lol, I'll love you forever! Another steamy chapter written by the amazing Whitney herself.

Mmm, two of my favorite men plus Chris Hemsworth and Tom Hiddleston who are both beautiful men as well, you really hit the jackpot here. I'm just reading this now and the first chapter blew me away. Poor Mia, still a virgin at age 20 and unable to get laid or get herself to come. That's the same for me too, I can't get myself to cum with just my fingers or rubbing my clit. I really need a vibrator lol. None of the boys I've had sex with haven't been able to make me cum either. When Mia said, "I'm broken" I was thinking the exact same thing. I guess I just haven't found the right person to do the job. Anyways, that was probably tmi so back onto the chapter. Mmm, Brian as a sexy escort/deflorist, I could picture it clearly in my head. I remember when I was a virgin and I was a nervous wreck just like she was and I don't blame her. Being in the prescence of such a sexy man, like OH MY GOD DUDE!!! Mmm I could picture Brian's body, his facial structure clearly thanks to your vivid description. I envy you for having such awesome description skills. Just amazing. I like how you took it slow, very good buildup. Like Rachel said, I'm glad she didn't come right away so that it was more of a challenge for Brian. If it were me, I don't know, I probably would've came at just from his fingers or that tongue lol but I wouldn't know lol. Darn you Brian for being married! lol. The whole sex scene was amazing, love your description of it all. I could picture it and now I'm all hot and bothered. It is very hot in here now and I have a problem down there. It's been so long since I've been laid and I need to be laid dammit! I have to cool down just from the intensity of that first chapter. You are such a great writer and I love this so much! After I've cooled down, I shall move onto Mr. Hemsworth. Great first chapter lady! Commenting, reccing, and subscribing!

My four favourite men all wrapped up in a shexy ass story, why haven't I read this before?!

I'll just do this chapter by chapter, otherwise I'll get lost and start to ramble all over the place XD

I am officially Team Brian and Mia! I love this pairing. She's so sweet and nervous and shy, in comes Brian the experienced "panty dropper" ready to deflower her and take her to places she never knew existed. How I'd love to be Mia right now!

Holy shit, this is intense! I'm actually sat here heavy breathing reading this! For some reason, I really like that it took him ages for her to come, like she said, it takes her ages and for him to make her come just like that would be really unrealistic so, yeah, I like it! :D So many lines that made me laugh out loud in this chapter but this.. Fortunately, I’ve got the skills to pay the bills. Made me laugh and swoon in equal amounts! Haha. I like that he's walking her through it step by step, not just getting down to business, he really is a sweetheart!

Wooow! That first chapter blew me away! Onto the next!

CHRIS HEMSWORTH OMG CHRIS HEMSWORTH! Okay, I'll stop fan girling and read XD
Oh holy Johnny Christ, Chris being all dominant and sexy and UNFF! Yes, I like this chapter very much! I'm imagining all sorts now XD

I like that they're one big, kinda dysfunctional, but happy family! Chris stealing Tom's tea, so funny! I can see Alyssa lusting after Brian (I want him to be with Mia FYI XD) but holy hell, Matt and O.. there's some sexual tension there, sheesh! It won't be long before Matt gets his hands on her!

How are you expecting me to function properly when you follow a really dominant and sexy Chris with cocky, dominant, sexy as all hell Matt?!?! OH MY GOD! He's just throwing her around like some rag doll..please pick me next Matt? Hahaha. This is so effing hot!

Now onto Tom... Oh Tom..Tom,Tom,Tom.. you romantic bastard you! I'm seriously swooning all over the place here!

Gabby and Matt.. perfect match I think! I kinda like Matt, he's so cocky but so damn sexy too! Seriously, rough sex does not get much better than this guys and girls!!

ahdjhfjdhfjkhf! So, what I said about Matt being sexy and rough? FORGET IT! OH MY JOHNNY CHRIST, THIS KINDA BRIAN IS SEXY AS ALL HELL!!!! DADDY KINK, GOODBYE PANTS, IT WAS NICE KNOWING YOU! I felt the need for caps there.. but seriously, holy fucking shit balls!! The dirty talk over the phone..Brian getting so turned on he literally ravishes her on the kitchen table..and then just fucking annihilates her on the chair..I'm done, I'm dead, I've fan girled and I can't get up, HALP!

The contrast to them having sex, if you can call it that.. I think its more of an animalistic mating ritual or something going on there.. LOL. But the ending is so sweet and so tender, Brian feeling like he can me himself completely around Gabby is so sweet and cute! BUT and its a big but, cause big buts don't lie.. anyway.. XD I really really want him and Mia to be together forever and ever and ever and have cute little babies and maybe he could show his rough side to her? I doubt she's say no.. what woman in their right mind would?

Maybe Gabby can find some poor soul to deflower and have her way with every night while Brian and Mia fall in love :D

So..having said all that. This here story..I'm addicted! Expect more word explosions in the near future my love, this is AMAZING!

Your smut is TOO DIE FOR!

excellent, love it, could hug it if I could haha.

I'ma stop talking now.. Haha

Very much looking forward to the next chapter! Oh.. and thanks for the little plug on your summary!

..... holy shit, dude.

Jesus H.P. Lovechrist, THAT WAS SO FUCKING HOT, WOMAN!! It was so hot that it literally sucked all of the moisture out of my mouth and I'm just sitting here like a dog, smacking my chops. AMAZING! Gabby and Brian are so hot! I can't stop using the word "hot". THIS CHAPTER WAS AN INFERNO!!

bloody fucking hell O M G

i think that was my favorite chapter so far omg just omg. that was the hottest thing fucking ever. it was like the kind of thing i dream of like woah. it was fucking amazing ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

holy mother of all things synyster gates. :o
i have to change my panties. i love this story, i love this update. it was so hot and dominate but without being too cliche. i love how you always keep your smut scenes fresh and new, never the same thing twice. very detailed and very well worded. i admire that. a lot. teach me your ways master.lol
i think brian and gabby would be adorable together. <3

I really love this!

Love it... Although I'm wondering if this tom character is based off the one and only tom hardy?!?!?

I'm hooked.

Please update soon .This is literally my new addiction

This is so freakin GOOD! Can't wait for more. Subscribing...NOW! :D

HUGE Brian and Mia fan! Keep that going please?

MORE PLEASE! =D

AMAZING!!!
Can't wait to read more!
Update soon please!

That was somehow both incredibly erotic and insanely hilarious! I love Gabby! She's so perfect for him! But I'm still wondering if and when he'll land Odette. LOVE THIS STORY!!

Well then.... Wow...

What a match those two make!! Hahaha!! That is so great and a hot chapter! So rough! I can't wait to read more!

Amazing update :)

Love this story!!
Your writing in fucking amazing! Probably some of the best sex scenes I've read on Mibba!
Can't wait to read more!