I don't know who I could and Tom was a sweetheart and I really don't know him but Matt or Brian were the ones that really got to me. Bri because he was so sweet and Matt because honestly it was kind of hot that he took it just like that, without going slow
oh have mercy.. tom.. what a sweetheart i just love him he's so yummy with that whole english gentleman thingy
who i'd pick?? oh i really dunno.. bri and tom so sweet and just *swoons* and then we have chris and matt that's just so.. the opposite but so fuckin' hot.. O_o i honestly can't decide
I'd either pick Tom or Brian. Preferably both at the same time ;) that would be such a threesome! That would be an excellent chapter. If I could t have both I'd probably pick Brian cuz I love his hair and tats and more badassness. You are so amazing its not even funny. Keep writing this story!
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If I ha to choose one to take my virginity it'd have to be have to be all of them. Just kidding (not really) but I'd pick Chris. But I don't know for sure. Ugh >.>
Oh that was such a freaking amazing chapter! Tom is my favorite character, he is just so chivalrous but so damn sexy too! *squeal* can't wait for more! :D
Okay now that was such a hot chapter and God I missed this story and I miss Adventure too ;)!! But wow, Matt really knows what he is doing! You described Matt's character to a T. He's a jerk in this story and he will be a jerk no matter what in it!! I can't wait to read more!
Okay so a lot of people are saying he was too mean, but according to his character I thought it was perfect. He's an asshole and I hated him last chapter and I hate him now. He's a pig and I hope Karma bites him...hard. I'm with Odette on this one.
I loved that a lot! Matt was so sexy! My only constructive criticism would be that he did seem a bit too mean. I think it would be good if he was a bit more caring about her but still rough. Just an idea. I still really really liked it! Keep up the good work!