@ gunslinger. Avenged Sevenfold and the Avengers LOL. I wasn't even thinking of it that way, but I totally am now. I'd give my entire life savings to go see a movie like that!
So... I can only tell you how much of a GENIUS you are so many times, but YOU'RE A FREAKIN' GENIUS! I just started reading this and... I cannot even. I have lost all ability to even! You are amazing! The power of your smut is completely unparalleled! I bow down to you, the queen of lusty literotica! Also, this line made me giggle: "enough to produce a whole field of babies—maybe even enough to populate a small country." SO MUCH SEED!
OH MY GOD. LET ME SING THE PRAISES OF THIS STORY OMG. AVENGED SEVENFOLD AND THE AVENGERS PERFEXT COMBO AND OH MY GOD. HOTTEST SMUT I'VE READ IN A EHILE. I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE AND I WILL BE RETEADING THIS.
the way you described chris- just made me want to change his name in the story to thor love how you made him so dominant and just so fuckin' hot!!!!!!!!! goddamn
can't wait to find out how you'll do Matt and Tom.. tom that I see as the perfect english gentleman <3 damn him! heheheh
HOLY FUCK! That house is amazing!!! I can't wait to see what you've got in store for Tom Hiddleston.. He's my favorite! I was thinking... And you don't HAVE to do this seeing as it's not my story and idk what the plot is yet ect... but as i was reading the story I had and idea. I was thinking about how funny it would be if the company carnal pleasures somehow got all the customers in one sitting. As like a meet and greet. lol I was laughing hysterically at the thought of Carnal Pleasures trying to support its customers by letting everyone meet each other. Cuz I would love to see all the deflourists customers meet! (and Im excited for new characters as well)
Ummm, i just have four words, THAT. WAS. FUCKING. AMAZING.
like seriously wow. I'm so happy this was different than ones i've read where it didn't take much to make "the virgin" finish. I loved how you wrote brian it was just so gaaaaah. i'm so happy this was different I'm gonna love this whole thing. I just know i will and i'm just gonna wait here and wait. please please please update soon or this might kill me lol
This is the most incredibly sexy story I have ever read! I can't wait for more! Maybe down the road she should have a threesome with Brian and Matt. Keep up the amazing work!! :)
Wow... She feels like a real person. I love her! Brian is right. she should never change. This should be more popular than fifty shades... But you know what I'm really excited about? Hiddleston... I've got the Hiddles... BAD
Aww, don't cry, it had a happy ending. At least for now This chapter took forever to write, but hopefully chapter 2 will flow out of me a little faster. I'm a bit of a perfectionist. You're awesome, and I look forward to your comments. Glad you enjoyed it!
I just about cried at the end. Why? I don't know. I'm an emotional roller coaster and this story is probably the most sexually frustrating thing that I've read. :) anyways, I LOVED it. I can't wait to read more about their sexcapades and to see about the other characters. Another golden story in the making.
@ amodernmyth88 Thanks for the comment. So glad you enjoyed it. It took me a week to write that chapter and I didn't even realize it would be so looonnngg LOL. Brian's got his work cut out for him with little miss Mia, so stay tuned!
Avenged Sevenfold and the Avengers LOL. I wasn't even thinking of it that way, but I totally am now. I'd give my entire life savings to go see a movie like that!