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  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    There is definitely going to be some confrontation after James sees that Clare isn't at the game. I feel so bad for Clare though.
    I'm still really loving this story :)
    June 28th, 2013 at 11:42am
  • kendra-rae

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    Uh oh! James is going to be so pissed off that Claire isn't there and I hope reality slaps him in the face that if he don't stop what he's doing some will come in a sweep his woe off her feet but she soo in love with James it is amazing! Love it <3
    June 27th, 2013 at 09:11pm
  • magwag

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    I'm betting James is gonna be more pissed than upset that she's not there, and since he's so oblivious to his own action's affecting Clare they might have a little confrontation... Please update again soon, I looooove this story!!
    June 27th, 2013 at 05:19pm
  • Crosby'sBabyGirl

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    JAMES GET YOUR HEAD OUT OF YOUR ASS AND START ACTING LIKE REAL HUSBAND. Great update, can't wait for more.
    June 27th, 2013 at 04:52pm
  • realdeal18

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    Love how Paul is getting in their business and helping Clare feel better!! James needs to wake up before he loses her!!! Can't wait for more!!
    June 27th, 2013 at 03:51pm
  • Ladyfiaran

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    Ugh, WTF is wrong with James? Sad
    June 27th, 2013 at 03:38pm
  • WallFlower09

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    love love love the story so far...can't wait to read next and see what happens with Paul...didn't think it was going to be paul but because of the relationship he seems to have with neal, it works!
    June 27th, 2013 at 02:09pm
  • HelloSunshine!

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    I am going to be greedy by saying that I want another update ASAP! Love this story!!!
    June 27th, 2013 at 08:18am
  • magwag

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    YES omg Paul is perfect because he lives down the street!!!!! I was so happy when he agreed to their date but then the end of the chapter wow what a douche! I wonder where he is?! Please update soon!
    June 26th, 2013 at 05:58pm
  • kendra-rae

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    This is an awesome story so far!! I really like :) and I do think Paul will play a big role in making James jealous or at least I hope so haha
    June 26th, 2013 at 01:09pm
  • ray8788

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    Love this story, can't wait till the next update
    June 26th, 2013 at 12:30pm
  • Urmel2010

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    this is one of my top 3 stories on here right now. can't wait for an update to see how it goes :D
    June 26th, 2013 at 11:25am
  • kare_bear

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    Excited to see where you take this. I'd love to see Paul play a bigger role. She needs to see she deserves better.
    June 26th, 2013 at 07:53am
  • bxgurl95

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    Wow she's trying so hard, poor girl
    June 26th, 2013 at 06:27am
  • Crosby'sBabyGirl

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    JAMES YOU'RE AN ASSHOLE, STOP BEGIN SUCH AN ASSHOLE, CLARE SLAP THE ASSHOLE OUT OF HIM.
    June 26th, 2013 at 03:46am
  • neon.band.aids.

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    Oh my god. What's she gonna do???? Please update again soon!
    June 26th, 2013 at 02:15am
  • xohunnyxo

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    He won't know just how great she is until she leaves his ass. Men can be so stupid sometimes. Freeking love this story<3
    June 26th, 2013 at 01:28am
  • Kaly18

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    I cant wait to see what she has in mind. Sid, G, Paulie any of those would work?
    June 25th, 2013 at 10:01pm
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    I think Clare is going to confront him but not sure how she's going to though.
    By the way this story is anything but boring and I really love how you're setting up the story. I just want to read more! :)
    June 25th, 2013 at 11:13am
  • pitts87pens

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    My first thought was going to be Sidney Crosby, but I'm not sure, maybe Paul Martin?! Looking forward to see what she is going to do!
    June 25th, 2013 at 04:12am
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