A Lifelong Promise - Comments

Oh boy, is she going to make jealous?

I wonder what her plan is.

I am so in love with this it's ridiculous!!! I'm guessing whatever her plan is, it's entirely based around fighting back since she's finally realized that being an amazing person and wife isn't going to work. But I love that she is so intent on saving her marriage with James, who by the way has been driving me crazy! You have painted the picture of his loss of control over his life and marriage perfectly. Please please pleaaaaaaase update this again soon I'm dying for the next chapter!

What's her idea?!?!? Dot leave me hanging!!!! Update again soon!

Well that is her husband and she's trying to fix it not just for him and the sanctity of marriage but because she really loves him. I really like that you did some flashbacks again. It gives you. More rounded sense of the characters and you can see the parallel with now

Seriously one of the most originalist stories on mibba! Love love love love it! Cannot wait for the next update!

love the story so far...can't wait to read more!

Really enjoying it so far, looked forward to what happens with these two.

I actually enjoy the way you set up your stories, it makes it more interesting when more things are revealed about the characters backgrounds etc.

I'm really liking it so far and can't wait for more! :)

I LOVE the way you set up your stories. If we don't learn character backgrounds, personalities, and intentions, we'll never understand the story and the character's choices later on. This rocks so far, please pretty please update soon!!

Great set -up chapter: long, descriptive and engaging. Can't wish or wait for more!

Oh James you are going to get it!

James is going to get his comeuppance sooner or later, Sid is right. Poor Claire

I love this story so far, can't wait for more!

Wow, James youre heading down the wrong path. ARE YOU STUPID, YOUR WIFE LOVES YOU.

I really like this already. Can't wait for more.

From the first chapter this sounds really interesting. I'm excited to see where it goes from here! :)

I wonder if she actually knows what he's up to. Update again soon!

This is really good, I like the idea of James being a douche and his wife not taking it anymore. I'd like to see how this goes

This is awesome already! I'm guessing the mysterious player who swoops in and befriends Clare is newish to the gang, so maybe Sutter, Glass, Bennett... but hey, could be anyone! I know you might surprise us!