A Lifelong Promise - Comments

love love love -- and i'm totally team paulie over james

James is a liar and a cheater!!!! I want Clare to find love, happiness, and trust in a relationship!

I'm happy that she didn't jump right back into it and she's going to *try* to make him work for it. #teamPaul

Hopefully this is the wake up call James needed. You can tell he's uncomfortable being there and is having second thoughts about what he's done previously. I do think Paul might have feelings for Clare though so that could complicate things.

After every update I love this story even more! :)

Ooooh I like James but he needs to get it together

Oh, do I ever want James to pick up on the tension growing between Clare and Paul. I don't think he can just go back to the way he was before (right now) so as of right now, I'm Team Paul.

I love the fact that James is sucking up and like literally crawling out of his skin but I don't think he's going to change as of right now! And I'm glad Paul's there for her to talk to because it doesn't seem like she friend with a lot of the WAGs, I think James is soon going to lose his his lid with Paul. Love it <3

I seriously love this story so much I wish it was possible to have a new chapter every minute! It's so cool to see each of the characters develop, like James is kind of starting to realize he's being a complete dick, Clare is starting to realize things might be worse than she imagined and maybe beyond repair, and Paul is starting to really get pissed about the whole situation! I was so mad though when James just yanked her away at the end there! I think her and Paul need to conspire against James and get him thinking they are messing around or something. I don't know, it just seems like the only time he feels anything about Clare anymore is when he gets upset with her so maybe that's the way to do it!

Paul better not take Clare away from James. Or, maybe this is what needs to happen for James to realize how much he really does love her.

Clare should dump James and go for Paul!

oh gosh. oh gosh. oh gosh. I want to know what Paul was going to say and what James will say! Please update again soon!!!

James is going to get burned

This was an amazing chapter! I hope Clare and Paul end up together

my heart is literally breaking for paul. i don't know how clare can stay with james if she even thinks he may be cheating without some kind of confrontation.

I bet he's going to try to lie or something to convince her to go home alone.

Cheaters never deserve to get the girl. Never!! That is something I could not recover from and stay with that person. If the commitment is not going to be honored then I'd be kicking him to the curb!!! She deserves better than that.

I love Paul and his meddling (for a good cause). I really hope she goes and James realizes that it's nice to go out with her after games, too, and he doesn't need other women at bars, but I do see some kind of drama going down at the bar--I feel like the night will end poorly, but then again, maybe not. And like someone else said, I'm interested to see if Paul is trying to get her and James' marriage patched up or if he's trying to get closer to her himself (though I think it's the former and Paul's just being a good guy). I really love this story so far, I'm excited for the next update!

I think Paul's idea is really clever. It will really test how James is while Clare is around when he's out. I'm interested to see how this goes!

Hahaha I love Paul and what's he's doing to James!! And asking Clare to come out with them tonight is genius on Paul's part I really hope she does go! She deserves a night out after all this worrying and what not and I can't wait to see how James reacts in the club with Clare there:) love it <3

Oh my God this story is killing me!!! I love that Clare is gonna go out with them, I hope some of James' skanks come up to him while they are there. An I seriously love Paul right now, but it seems like no one is gonna get through James' thick skull. Please update again soon!!