oh my god the end... jimmy's part :( God.. I cried like a baby.. that was so touching daamn.. but I loved the chapter and I'm glad that brian is okay again :) yey! love this story so freaking much
"First of all, you're not that bad. It's not like fuckin' Johnny procreated or some shit"- Hands down my favorite line of the whole chapter! Christ, I love that this is funny and sweet at exactly the same time!
Thanks!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I hope you like the rest of the chapters as much as the first! My chapters started out shorter around 2000 words and gradually got longer the longer that I wrote, now I'm between 6000-7500 words and I don't think I'll get much longer than that, but I guess I'll never know. Thanks for reading! I'd love to hear what you think as you get farther into the story!
So, I just read the first chapter and I loved it! Seriously, I can't wait to read the rest of this and the super long chapters are defiantly going to keep me entertained for a long while (I never learned how to do that!), but anyways. What I love the most about this story is it's pure originality- usually, either the guy has got a random girl pregnant and gets together with them or it's a couple with a kid. I love that they've been together before and then they decide to pull it together. Also- super hot sex scene! Like seriously, I want that Brian in my bed please! I'm going to carry on reading because I wanna see what happens next!
OMG, my feelings hurt so fucking bad at first, I was crying. But thank god Brian is willing to get himself clean. God, I loved this chapter. Please update soon!!! :3
Thanks so much for the kind words! New chapter posted and more to come soon. This one is still pretty emotional, but not as scary LOL You guys are awesome!!
daaaamn what an emotional chapter.. you had me crying a few times.. omg I was so scared in the beginning thinking that one of them had died.. but I'm glad they're okay. And I laughed at the end when brian complained about the catheter xD oh my, update soon! another great chapter :)