Damn This Wild Young Heart. - Comments

@ irrelevant.
Thank you! :)

This is actually really cute and i can't wait for the next update! :)

@ skyelilly
Thank you! I'm glad! I'll mark today as your anniversary with it. :)

@ cynicalqueen
90's references are my favorite references! I'm so glad that you like it! And don't worry, I've only been writing it for like a week, so you're not that far behind.

“You mean do I love the delicious fungus that defies all standards and allows to be eaten?” I shot back. “Um. Yeah.”

I nearly died laughing. My dear, your writing is phenomenal! You write interactions between characters beautifully and you don't disappoint with the witty banter at all. I loved the 90's references, that seriously made my day and the part about the drag queens was perfect. I'm just sorry I didn't find this story earlier.

I am totally in love with this story

@ vonhejibergen
Ugh I adore you you are so sweet thank you I think my ego just inflated but so did my heart so we are good.
I'm glad you liked the drag queens! It's San Francisco! There can't be a SF story without drag queens!
The entire story will hopefully be revolving around the wit and conversation, which is something I really have to work at too but it's getting there. Thank you so much for you feedback!!!

What do I think? I think you are a brilliant writer who is incredibly witty, writes great conversations (something I'm dreadful at), and is making me love this story even more then I already was (don't know if that's really possible).

This is amazing, my favorite parts were Harry strutting his stuff on the train-catwalk, Charmed and That's So Raven bit, because lets be honest both were great shows, the selling Harry to drag queens, how Lola melted about him calling her cute, and how you ended the chapter "We have drag queens to find."

So basically I adored this whole thing. Thank you :)

@ sylvia wrath
OH GOD THEY'RE GOING TO NEED TO GO ON THE RUN!

@ formerlyknownas
here is a hint: manhunt

@ sylvia wrath
OH GOD SO MANY THINGS

@ formerlyknownas
The instagram is a thing too. And then there's another thing in there as well. SEE I TOLD YOU ALL THE FORESHADOWING.

@ nicolem
Thank you! I'm glad that you like it!

@ sylvia wrath
WOULD IT BE THE INSTAGRAM THING? BECAUSE I HAD A FEELING THAT WOULD BE A THING TOO.

great chapter! can't wait to read more :)

@ iWearConverse
I am so glad! I was struggling with Harry at first but I finally think I've got him!

This story makes me laugh so much I love it. I adore Lola and I just love the way you write Harry's character. Update soon :)

@ formerlyknownas
But the muscles are the best part!!!!
Yes yes yes the phone being shut off is a thing. There is also another big thing said before that but I digress.
This is great? No, you're great!!!!

@ temaiawilliams
Well I mean I could be considerably less amazing but then it probably wouldn't be as enjoyable?
I kid, I kid.
Please don't die! Because then you won't be alive for the next update! Which won't be immediate but I am pretty machine-like in getting these things out.
I'm glad you like it!

“You mean do I love the delicious fungus that defies all standards and allows to be eaten?” I shot back. “Um. Yeah.”
This speaks to me on an emotional level.
Also I get the feeling something is going to come from her shutting her phone off. I'm just not sure what.
And let's just nOT TALK ABOUT ALL THE TALK ABOUT HARRY'S MUSCLES LIKE PLS.
Ugh this is great.