Damn This Wild Young Heart. - Comments

Perfection! One of my faves atm! Thank you! xx

I would just like to say, do you know the feeling when you walk out of a theatre after watching a good movie and you felt like it was life changing because it was soo good? well..this is definitely one of my favs. You're an excellent writer, this is the first fanfic I've read on mibba (because I'm usually on 1dff) speaking of ,I just realized you're the author 'perfect teeth' great story as well btw,but anyway your writing made this so ..so hm realistic in the conversations and reactions! If this were to happen, and those are pretty rare to find in some writers..so I love you for that! Thanks for sharing your ...awesomeness! :)

I LOVE THAT SHE'S JEALOUS OF HARRY FOR HANGING OUT WITH ALEXA CHUNG HAHAHAHAHA
oh my god Harry talking about his ass kill me now
and the signing off with kisses thing they are seriously too cute
also THANK YOU FOR THIS BEAUTIFULLY ADORABLE FIC AHHHH
aaaaaaaaand off to start Perfect Teeth i am!

i miss the name HP Pavilion, so much better than SAP Center (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ
HAH! WINKY FACES!
text flirting is terrible HAHAHA
OH MY GOD IF DAKOTA AND NIALL END UP TOGETHER I WILL CRY TEARS OF JOY
the "dirty hipster" comment has me wheezing

Dakota is so rational and i love her so much
also i realize my mistake
"Amber Alert" is for sure NOT Life Alert and i now feel like an idiot
THE VENUE WOULD BE SAP CENTER
I FEEL SO PROUD THAT I KNOW ALL THIS INFORMATION HAHAHAHAHA

oh my god Amanda
"you're officially my favorite" uM HE WASN'T BEFORE?!
damn it i thought he'd say in my bedroom but i suppose they haven't been together "nearly long enough" for anything like that to happen
i suppose the Golden Gate will do /hrumph

oh my god Amanda
"you're officially my favorite" uM HE WASN'T BEFORE?!
damn it i thought he'd say in my bedroom but i suppose they haven't been together "nearly long enough" for anything like that to happen
i suppose the Golden Gate will do /hrumph

Telegraph is the best street ever (feel free to ignore my commentary on SF)
oh my god she's not good with crushes?!
if she wrote down thoughts like "bottling up the way he talked" and read it to them they'd be madly in love with her (if they weren't already)
ALSO, i love how she's using Brit slang! it's like she's making him feel at home, haha (((((:
OH DON'T THINK I DIDN'T CATCH THAT
"I'VE FALLEN AND I CAN'T GET UP" AND THEN AMBER ALERT THE FABULOUS DRAG QUEEN

oh my god she took Bart alone
she is one brave chica
again with the deep shit oh my god
Lola is so............ philosophical, it's insanely inspiring!
OH MY GOD AND THE BLACK DOT OH MY GOD
she is definitely a curator
Harry's cover up story is GENIUS
by the way if you haven't figured it out yet, i'll be commenting on every single update as i go along
Lola is so incredibly perceptive and i love that so much about her
AND THE GUARD'S PHOTOGRAPH OF THE HAPPY COUPLE IS SHEER PERFECTION

HER NAME IS AMBER ALERT
ALL RIGHT I'VE HAD ENOUGH
THIS IS KILLING ME
the drag queens oh god
all though i don't know if that's necessarily quintessentially San Franciscan??? i mean, i live in the area and yet i'm learning more about SF from this story and i have in my whole life, so i may be wrong ehehe

okay so my itty bitty feminist is a bit wistful that Lola didn't criticize his masculinity/ego/whatever bc that would have been hilarious and his reaction would've been even better but yeah i had no idea where i was going with this
omfg that's right, he isn't legal to drink in the US! (damn our drinking laws)

okay so i just love Lola and Dakota's friendship already
FIRST OF ALL, A PUG PURSE. THAT IS ALL KINDS OF AMAZING????
the holding hands thing holy shit that is too true and i never even realized it till you literacized (not even a word but i'm making it one) or literated or whatevered it tilL YOU PENNED IT
THERE WE GO.
also that ending made me super giddy inside

I didn't think anything could distract me from how much I miss Perfect Teeth, but alas, this story has done it. I never rec fics to my roommate, but I sent this link to her. Too adorable, spontaneous, and heart-warming. Bravo.

Hi there! I just read this entire story and I thought it was such a fun little story! You really know how to make an exciting adventure! Btw I am currently reading Perfect Teeth, and I love that one as well! Keep doing what you are doing girl!

This was very well written and amazing :) would you be able to send me the link to Sam's story? The water and a star ong? I would greatly appreciate it :) loved heading this and look forward to reading more from you in the future :)

@ sylvia wrath
Okay, cool! If you write something with them and remember... let me know so I can make sure i read it? :)

@ justSJ
my writing tumblr is hezranonsense.tumblr.com

@ sylvia wrath
Either way, I hope you write them! What's the link to your writing tumblr?

@ justSJ
there may be some Hola ficlets in the future, i'm just not sure if I would post them on Mibba or on my writing tumblr. Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!

I just found this yesterday cause someone recommended it and it's definitely one of my new favorite stories! Would you ever consider writing a sequel or maybe little one shots of them in the future?