Damn This Wild Young Heart. - Comments

oh wow i actually love this so much can you not be so fucking amazing at writing!!!! like the conversations and stuff are so good PLEASE UPDATE BECAUSE I AM DYING HERE

@ cynicalqueen
I've missed your comments!!!
I'm so glad that you like it! The banter is what I'm most excited for in this story, but it's also the thing I'm most pressured about, because I want it to be witty! and funny! without seeming like it's a bit too much. I'm super thrilled that you like it so far!

I love this already and not because it's a fanfiction. Lola actually reminds me of my best friend and her inner thoughts are really something. I loved the banter between Lola and Harry, it's hilarious. I've missed your writing my dear, well done, :)

@ vonhejibergen
Thank you so so so much! Lola and Harry's dynamic is the most exciting part of writing this!
ALSO man you have no idea how awful/hard/time-consuming it was to get this layout right so I am flattered that someone noticed. :)
I'm working on the next update now so hopefully it'll be here quickly!

This is amazing and I am adoring your writing style. Your layout is really good. :) The main character is so wonderful and her inner thoughts are wonderful. I can not wait for an update, keep it coming because I love the dynamic between Harry and Lola.

@ formerlyknownas
I hope you get your breathe back soon!
YES LEGS TANGLED UP
I'm super glad that you like it!!!!

oh god going to explore and NEARLY HAND HOLDING
and let's not even talk about them sharing a hammock with bodies thrown together and LEGS TANGLED UP
I need a minute to start breathing again
this is so brilliant I want to die

@ sylvia wrath
omg shut up lmao pls the queen are you kidding

@ formerlyknownas
um it's like the queen came down and touched my story

YOU ARE BRILLIANT AND I'M SO EXCITED I CAN'T SAY IT ENOUGH I CAN'T GET OVER IT
STILL DROOLING

@ iWearConverse
I'm glad you laughed! Thank you! :)

“Seriously?” I muttered under my breath, as it was 8:54 and were these people unaware that sometimes a homegirl has plans and wants to actually leave on time?

I laughed so hard. This is off to an amazing start, can't wait for you to continue it :)