I really enjoy reading this fic. It's cute how James acts and how well the whole band took the bird into their lives. Aaaannnddd the drama was placed perfectly, good timing and all, you know.
@ I'mDifferent Thank you, I'm glad you like it! I won't be updating till tomorrow thought, well that's what it's looking like anyways I may change my mind but today has just been a long day and I wanna make the next chapter really good so I'm gonna take this day to kind of think about it. But keep reading and I hope you continue to enjoy it!
I think friendship would be really good for this one considering she's 16 almost 17. Friendship would make the relationship more meaningful and after she turns 17 I think it would be good to turn up the romance!
@ LonelyInASeaOfStars I'm glad you like how it's going! I'm already trying to figure out a really good next chapter! I just don't know if the story is ready for more romance or more friendship first you know? But I just really want it to be good so you should get back to me tell me if you think more romance or friendship first and then I'll fix up a nice chapter! Thanks for reading too! :)
@ I'mDifferent Haha thank you very much! I'm just glad you like it and I try my best to update every night so trust me you probably won't have to wait too long! Just look out for the next update! :)
@ LonelyInASeaOfStars Thank You! I was a little worried I was using "Fourth Grade Words" If you know what i mean haha but i am going to be continuing and I'm actually uploading here in a few minutes and I'm gonna start on the fourth chapter and it should be up early tomorrow or later tomorrow! But I'm really glad you like it! Thanks again and make sure you keep reading! SECRET TIP: I think you're gonna like the way things are turning cuz I do!!
@ LonelyInASeaOfStars Thank You! I was a little worried I was using "Fourth Grade Words" If you know what i mean haha but i am going to be continuing and I'm actually uploading here in a few minutes and I'm gonna start on the fourth chapter and it should be up early tomorrow or later tomorrow! But I'm really glad you like it! Thanks again and make sure you keep reading! SECRET TIP: I think you're gonna like the way things are turning cuz I do!!
@ LonelyInASeaOfStars I didnt mean to type the same thing twice my computer froze so I tried pushing the submit button twice so thats why its up there twice lol :P
I think the style you're using right now is great :D I love this story so far and I hope you continue it. I'm curious to see how everything will turn out :3
mmm not bad, not bad, :) the error that mostly bothers me, is when your charaters are talking, it looks like "are you ready?" "hell yeah" when it should look like; "Are you ready?" "Hell yeah!" that's the only thing i caught that bothered me, mind you, i'm typing on my phone, so I can't say much about grammer errors or anything.