Deducing Tragedy Part Two: Speak No Lies - Comments

  • Shortskirt-Bluescarf

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    Oh you are wonderful! It was getting better and better then she gave that little Sherlock look. Ah! And loved the connection to Frost. More than fitting. Thanks for being brilliant!
    August 31st, 2013 at 07:20pm
  • wolfprincess1995

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    Love this. love this.l love this!! write more please!
    August 31st, 2013 at 06:40pm
  • veneficas.cuprum

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    This chapter seriously gave me chills. It was... God it was wonderful!!! I read it like six times. Molly is so adorable! She's so much like sherlock. I wish she was still alive :( this is so good. Gah! Can't wait for tuesday
    August 31st, 2013 at 05:50pm
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    Could someone lend me a snorkel for all the feels I'm swimming in? Thanks! ... Brilliant! The intensity was a perfect level then the crescendo of emotion was at the right spot ending right after the climax. Props!!!
    August 28th, 2013 at 12:42am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Tell me how my throat decided to clench at the second they kissed causing me to choke on my sweet tea. Excellent timing esophagus. Thank you for that...
    AHHHHH! HE KISSED HER! *squeal*
    August 27th, 2013 at 07:17pm
  • veneficas.cuprum

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    Awe!!!!! Yay!! Semi.. Sort of.. Not really but still kind of fluff! The best kin with sherlock and Hanna/Ann :) this was such a good chapter I read it twice! I'm really curious about the letters on the paper but I really wanna see what happens to Ann now that sherlock kissed her! Hajj I can't wait to read more!!
    August 27th, 2013 at 02:41pm
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    @ wolfprincess1995
    well I love you <3 lols thank you! im glad you're enjoying it :D
    August 27th, 2013 at 08:39am
  • wolfprincess1995

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    I love this story
    August 27th, 2013 at 08:33am
  • Shortskirt-Bluescarf

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    can we say intense? Now she's just being cruel. I'm so glad Sherlock hasn't gotten bored through all of this. I don't think both him and Hannah would last (Hannah because I know she's in there. She's almost lost the battle with herself.). Thanks for the wonderfulness!!!!
    August 24th, 2013 at 05:09am
  • veneficas.cuprum

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    I'm seriously sitting in the break room grinning like a fool because that halter was wonderful. I really love John and how he's hurt and how well you portray his emotions in such great expressions and the way he reacts. I'll have you know I was having a day from hell at work and seeig you updates an reading this chapter made my whole day better :3
    August 23rd, 2013 at 04:02pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Hm. Obviously Ann knows something I dont. Grrr.
    :|
    August 23rd, 2013 at 02:54pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Molly! She needs a hug.
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    <3
    August 20th, 2013 at 10:15pm
  • veneficas.cuprum

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    You capture Molly so well!! I love her sticking up to sherlock in her mollyish sort of way, such a good chapter!! I can't wait for more! And thank you for reading my story! Take your time :3
    August 20th, 2013 at 03:52pm
  • veneficas.cuprum

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    My god that was brilliant!! Sorry I couldn't read sooner my life is a bit chaotic aha. But anyways, this was just... Wow. Poor Ben. You're so good at writing despairing scenes, this is so fabulous. I can't wait to see what happens next!
    August 17th, 2013 at 05:18pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    I feel for Ben, and then I kinda don't. I'm a complex person. Good update though.
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    August 16th, 2013 at 03:23pm
  • Shortskirt-Bluescarf

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    Another update so soon?!?! Bless! I had a feeling those two were doing something of the like. The last sentence summed everything up beautifully! If her and Sherlock ever do start touching or kissing one another, I do believe things would heat up VERY quickly. =) Thanks for the awesome story!
    August 16th, 2013 at 08:33am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    And my heart is still broken for Ann. :(
    But I love where this is going!
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    August 13th, 2013 at 04:51pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    huaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
    When?! What?! Who?! Why?!
    Well, I just died of a broken heart. Damn it.
    August 10th, 2013 at 04:34am
  • wolfprincess1995

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    you just killed my heart. why? update again onto a road of happiness please.
    August 9th, 2013 at 09:39pm
  • veneficas.cuprum

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    OH MY GOD

    YOU.... What?! Adsahdkfs!! I never saw that coming. Oh my gosh. This chapter had me in tears!! You're so evil!!... But I love this story so much. Oh my gosh. Wonderful. Just wonderful.
    August 9th, 2013 at 03:12pm