Deducing Tragedy Part Two: Speak No Lies - Comments

Lol sometimes I get carried away and shout my opinion to characters... My apologies. But you doing a great job so don't stop. :D
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Awe! I didn't know they dressed up Babs... :'(
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Asdgjdk!!!! He remembers!!!!! Aweeee yay I love where this is going :) this is suh a sweet chapter. Brilliant ;) I can't wait for more!!!!!

I'm ok with a YouTube channel. I think Ben doesn't even like Ann probably finds her unnecessary.
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Great way to start my day!! I loves te explanation, it gives Hanna/Ann more depth! This story is so brilliant. Ah i can't wait for more!! And YouTube videos would e pretty awesome!!

That was the best scene you've done in this story yet. The amount of tension is perfect. The razor sharp dialogue and battle of wits between them. When he tucks the hair behind her ear while crossing her... AH! And poor John! lol LOVED IT!!!! But hoping she calms her ego down enough for some fluff later. CARRY ON!!!

BADASS! I love her attitude. Even if it is a front. And does she think there is something going on between Ben and Tate??
Just wondering...
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WRITE MORE!!!

Assfghjj. This story. MY HEARTTTT. I love you but I hate you. On that note, I loved their reunion. It really stuck with Ann and Sherlocks character. I admit I miss Hanna but Ann is just as fascinating :) can't wait for the next update!!!

I'm so cold hearted. I think if Ann really wanted to put this man behind bars, she would suck up and push back any 'feelings' she would get if Sherlock was on the case. She knows that Sherlock would solve it; she's just scared and prideful about letting Sherlock near her.

... You are cruel!!! I so thought Hanna/Ann would be there! Gah! Good surprise hahah. I cannot wait for the next chapter! I really like Ben btw I love how you're fleshing out his character more :) great chapter as always!!

AHHHH SO GOOD! I love where this is all going! Can't wait to se what happns at Baker Street. So many possibilities.

Asdfhakldjk!!! Ahh! I really love how sherlock sees through her and finds Hanna beneath the disguise :) I can't wait for her to go talk to John a sherlock... That's gonna be intense!!!

Why'd she pass out? Stress?
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Huaaaaaaaaaaaaa! HE SAW HER!!!!!!! I'M FREAKING OUT!!!!!!
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Excellent!!!! Ahh this is so good, I have to read all your chapters twice because the first time I just race through them :D this is just gettin better and better! I have an idea for you, and the second I get on an actual computer I'm making it!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

@ madefornight
I had the biggest question mark above my head after that paragraph. It kinda threw me off from Sherlock remembering her. Sherlock's brain is too active to just forget something so important to him by accident. He would have had delete her willingly and he never did.

@ Hiding!Behind!Daryl
Congratulations on being the only person to catch that! Everyone else is so distraught over sherlock's memories that they completely missed it. :}

... Ben and Ann...??????????????????????????????????
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Does someone have a Jack the Ripper fetish? lol. It feels weird that even brilliant Sherlock would dismiss her so easily yet understandable for the plot's sake. Dark Hanna is going to be fun (interesting and full of angst), I can already tell. Great update!