He Smells Like the Ocean - Comments

Oh my goodness! I just found this story and I am in love! I need more! <3 :)

I just finished reading everything you have so far and I love it! I'm so curious to see where this story s going and I can't wait for another update!

Love this story!

Something tells me that Brian will do something not so nice. Update as soon as you can :)

Why do I have a feeling that something bad is going to happen at the BBQ & Brian is going to be the cause of it?

Can't wait for the next update!!

Ok, so I subscribed to this story AGES ago but then lost track and yadda yadda... ANYWAY, I finally caught up and can I just say - I love it so far! Your writing is so refreshing and mature and the story is absolutely captivating so far. I am definitely looking forward to what's next :)

I am glad Val didn't pressure her :) I have a bad feeling aboutnthat BBQ. And it has to do with Brian.

Fabulous update hun. I'm glad she and Val got to see each other. And the bbq! My mind is wondering so many things about that lol. I like how you showed us more of Ella's background and personslity here. Great job!

You updated yay!! Good chapter I can't wait to see what happens at the BBQ, can't wait for more update soon!! (:

Yay! Updates make me happy! Annoying asshole Brian does not! He needs to get his shit together!

just. fucking. update. it.

Brian acted like a total douche bag to her. He was the one that cheated on her, more than once, and then left her heartbroken. He has no right to behave the way he did. God, what a dick.

I agree with the comment below, I wish Ella would have called him out on his douchebaggery, or I don't know, punched him? Haha.

Looking forward to more drama

I really want to know more about their background. I really think it makes their characters and so far I love them. although I thought she should've had a little more back bone. Brian can't do any real damage. I'm just saying I wish she would've called him a dick or something and stormed out. HE cheated -- she should get the last word. at least. haha.

Great update hun! Brian is being a royal jerk but I know it's to add drama to the story. I do enjoy some drama. Really intense chapter. I can't wait to see how they interact with each other again in this story!

Brian is a dick. He cheats on her instead of telling her he wasn't happy since the first time, and now he treats her like that?? like she was the one who did the wrong thing. What did she do wrong?? moving out, and trying to move on?? Like sriously he's a dick, and she should have slaped or punched him right in his face.

I like that Ella and Zacky are truly just friends. It's sometimes hard to portray a m/f friendship in stories without people jumping to the conclusion that something is going to happen between them or that one of them has hidden feelings. I suppose a lot of the time that's true, but it's nice to see that's not the case for these two.

I can't say I blame Zack for questioning why she left. I understand she doesn't want to talk about it, but she also needs to accept that since she's the one that took off without explanation, if she wants to return and reignite her old friendships, she needs to be prepared to start explaining.

Yeah, Zack is definitely up to something...

Aww, Zack! Not cool. You don't blindside the poor girl like that! I know she's the one who messed up by leaving, but clearly she's having trouble adjusting to just being around him.. let alone all of them at once. But as Rach said below, his heart was in the right place. But honestly, it's hard not to think of him as little bit selfish... I mean, he did it because he wants things to return to how they used to be. But that's not necessarily gonna happen... at least not for a while.

Maybe, just maybe, spending time with the guys wouldn't be as hard as she thought it would've been.

Famous last words before the drama begins... Haha. But I'm looking forward to where it goes and I hope they're not too hard on her

Zack's heart was in the right place, and she understood, eventually, haha. It probably was a stupid move, but would she have gotten the courage to see the guys had he not intervened? I don't think so - at least not for a while, anyway.

Ahaha, trust Jimmy to break the ice in his own little way. Can't wait to see the exchange between Ella and Brian, it's either going to be super awkward or really good, haha.

More soon, please! :D

OMG! That chapter! The feels...... And Zacky! How could he? I know it was for the best but I would have been mortified if I were Ella LOL. Shew. That chapter was so intense and addicting that I kept reading too fast and had to slow down. I really, REALLY hope that you update this again soon. I just love it so much. I really like your writing style and your way with words. More soon, pretty please?

I liked it. I knew Zacky was setting her up, but still... I can't wait for more. I really want to know why she left and more on her and Brian's past. Hope you update soon.

Kind of messed up on Zacky's part
He should have realized Ella might have taken it bad
I get that all the guys missed Ella and wanted to see her but they practically ambushed her
Ella gets props for having the courage to stay