He Smells Like the Ocean - Comments

You know my love for this story so I am so happy you updated. I love Zacky and his need to fix everything but she should have saw that set up from the moment he wanted to go back to his place lol. I can't wait for more

Yay you updated! i like this story. cant wait to read more. update soon!

I love it :D I was sooo curious with the chapter title. but I have a feeling Brian doesn't feel like she thinks.

I was so intrigued by the title that I could not resist to have a look! Ooh, I love how you describe everything, all the little details, I love your writing. I really like this story so much.

Honestly, I'm not really sure where I last left off reading, so I've decided to just read it from the beginning. I'm sure I've already commented on the first chapter, so I'm just gonna give my thoughts on chapter two and three

I really liked Zacky's reaction. I think he totally have every right to be mad and demand answers, because if I was in his position, I would too. Honestly, I don't know the full reason why she ran away (I use that term because that's what appears to have happened) without so much as a goodbye, but it's hard for me to imagine a good enough excuse. I mean, we know now that she lost her father and that's terrible, of course, but like he said... she could've called or texted a goodbye, instead of just leaving them all to wonder. Hell, even a letter would've offered some closure and comfort. Anyways, my point is, I think he's 100% justified in what he's saying. Haha.

Having said all that, his gesture of a hug and asking for her to hang out with him was very sweet. I mean, it shows they must have had a very deep friendship, since he's setting aside his anger and issues with her departure and literally welcoming her back with open arms. I understand her apprehension about doing so, but really, it's the least she could do at this point.

I feel bad for her. I know my comment so far might have seemed a bit harsh towards her, but I guess I'm trying to understand both sides of it. I can't imagine how bad things were for her to have it drive her from her home and her friends, but it's easy to assume that it wasn't an easy decision. And based on how she broke down in her car, she clearly isn't 100% ready to confront her old life and the people from it.

“I don’t want to intrude.” Haha, she can't have thought that would work... I mean, if he thought she was intruding, he wouldn't have invited her along. Not to mention, how do you intrude on a lunch friend date if you're asked to it? Haha, silly girl.

She's very unsure and anxious about everything, isn't she? I mean, when he suggested that he felt she hadn't changed at all, she seemed to feel unnecessarily uneasy about whether he was being genuine or insulting her. Granted I couldn't hear his tone, but to me it seemed he was just making an offhanded comment... not trying to insinuate anything.

Zacky was lazy and would always wait until the last minute to change, and then he would take forever to get wherever he was going. You just described my boyfriend to a T! It's frustrating as hell, he takes twice as long as I do to get ready to go anywhere.

Sorry it's taken me so long to catch up, but I have now! And I really look forward to seeing how this plays out

Its about time lol I've missed this story! I wonder what Zacky is up to! Hmm updates soon please!!!

Something tells me Zacky isn't showing up alone or that one of the other guys is going to see them
Either way Ella is going to be found out

oh i hope nothing goes too terribly wrong lol...love it so far..can't wait for updates :)

Just found this and I love it so I hope you can update again soon. Xx

Oh man.....I can't wait to see what things may go wrong soon. Like...you pull me in because I want her to like....open back up and maybe loosen up a bit....but also....I get little hints that she suffered a lot of emotional pain from the break up and so on. I really want to see where this goes next! I have a feeling when Brian does see her, it's going to be intense and dramatic......which I love! Keep up the good work, lady. I want moar!

i love zach, but i want asshole brian to fly in and ruin things.

is that bad?

I do that a lot, hungry but too lazy to move XD I have been known to phone my boyfriend so he can come make me food

I'd like to think that Zack had more brains than to set her up, but he's a guy, they're weird. But from that last line, I think maybe Brian will show up?

More soon, please! :D

ohhhhhh I think like her, he's setting her up. And I think she's gonna flip.

Love it, he is so setting her up and I can't wait for the drama that comes from good intentions. So glad your muse is back!

Finally! Yes, and I'm sure he's totally about to set her up. That's why they're meeting at the beach, the guys are there... I think.

i know that feeling! it's like.. things seem to be going well, which means there's something that HAS to go wrong! i can't wait for more, lady!!<3

i love it!

it is so incredibly hard to find well written sevenfold stories anywhere, i am so thankful for this. i hope you're better at updating yours than i am mine, haha.
i love this. i really like ella's character and i'm anxious to get more insight to her too. ugh. sevenfold. <3

I am in love with this, can't wait to read more.

That was a wonderful update! It was well written and I'm intriuged to read more.