If You Told Me To - Comments

they're so cute :)

There are not complaints here!!
They are just so cute (I can't say that enough) even the way you describe her being so emotional about the brownies. It's so fleshing (I know i say that a lot too), it's just very true! Honestly, the nervousness , the description of enjoying the brownies, everything
Hope you enjoyed your break!

I'm all smiles here!
Was Harry's nervousness in response to the hug??

Super cute. :)

I absolutely agree, we have to see their relationship through their conversations and through their thoughts. These truth moments are good for Sarah because it gives her more insight into what Harry's thinking and I think she won't be so nervous the more he lets her into his life. Just love love love this! These updates are making me so happy!
Also just to clarify was the word virginity?

That was really cute. I'd love it at the end if you did like an epilogue where by accident they meet again in college or something and get back together.

Oh these two are so cute!
But really your descriptions and attention to detail are two of the many reasons why I love you're writing. You were talking about the laptop searing her things, pure genius! It takes me to another world I feel like I'm watching. Things are getting serious but I'm glad they're able to talk

Oh you're spoiling us now!
This was a cute chapter but jealousy can be a serious thing. I just love how innocent she is and how as new things happen she's discovering her feelings

Its so adorable how they're opening up to each other. They're letting their feelings come out without forcing them or anything. It's so nice to read

yes id love it!!

But it's not really even smooth sailing, these two have thought ha that they aren't sharing with each other and unknowingly they are having thoughts in common. They need to be sure to communicate. This is going to be tough as the summer draws to an end.

things are too peaceful.. .some shit is gonna go down

yo if my dad reacted to me getting a bf with ice cream and a baseball game i would be pretty happy haha

Love daddy daughter moments!
My dad's my favorite person so this was really sweet. He took it pretty well.

Didn't see that coming at all! I mean I guess y wouldn't be too hard to imagine that they were a thing and also they didn't deny it, so that didn't really help. I hope he isn't too made because nothing really serious has happened between them. Nice job throwing Zayn in there, offers a different dynamic of their world that I didn't think about. And I'm also interested to know how/why you devised to frame this around the main character being so young.
And wow, I thought I recommended this already, please forgive me :)

I'm glad they had that talk and that he really thought about how she was feeling.

I totally get why her head is spinning and something like this in her mind might really be a game changer. But just the same way she doesn't want to be judged by Harry she shouldn't judge him. He's been honest with her and she needs to vocalize what's going on... There's nothing to really process it doesn't affect her.
So happy for the update ! (Don't mind me venting^)

Awww I hope you update again soon!

aw harry the poor thing :(

I finally caught up with this, and oh my gosh, it is amazing and I've clearly been missing out with your stories. Especially this one!

Okay, so I'm in love with Sarah, and Harry because I feel like they balance each other out and that's a really good thing in a relationship and I just love the whole setup of this. Okay, I really like Harry's personality in this because I feel like it's almost accurate to his actual personality and put him in a setting where he's not use to being fuels it more. Maybe, I don't know. Someone can't be happy all the time. And I think it's adorable that Sarah wanted to try out makeup and be appealing to Harry, and that they're bickering turned into a little something more.

This story is giving me feels. Lost of feels.

Also, I really liked the recent chapter because it touched on a topic that doesn't really make Sarah feel comfortable and yeah it did make Harry feel bad but besides their small fight it's good for them to know where they stand, you know?

Well, I can't wait for the next update.