If You Told Me To - Comments

  • bxgurl95

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    I think he's not upset with her just disappointed. He's tried to prove to her how interested he is, but she kind of undermines it sometimes especially with that comment. I don't think she was trying to insult at all obviously she was more curious (especially because she's trying so hard to be interesting for him. She's amazed that he would be interested in her.) <-- I hope that was english lol :/
    Good chapter, these things do need to come out in the beginning of a relationship, especially as young as they are since they are bound to be insecure about somethings.

    PLEASE UPDATE!
    January 7th, 2014 at 04:07pm
  • justSJ

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    Oh nooooooo Sad
    January 7th, 2014 at 06:39am
  • DaniGates

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    So, it's been awhile! Ah! I missed reading your stories! I'm back in action though! trying to get my lazy butt back into the game! lol. I am in love with this story. Seriously! Can't wait to see where this all succumbs to! More, more :DDDD
    December 2nd, 2013 at 04:36am
  • nighttchanges

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    So the GIF of Harry is just...drool worthy. :) Sigh. Wonderful update. :)
    November 27th, 2013 at 11:51pm
  • bxgurl95

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    WOO HOO AN UPDATE
    That awkwardness was adorable and fitting for a young teenage girl. Can't wait to read more about these two!!
    November 25th, 2013 at 09:45pm
  • iWearConverse

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    I just get so excited when I see this story has been updated
    November 25th, 2013 at 08:39pm
  • Lawliet.

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    so cuteness
    November 25th, 2013 at 05:28am
  • dawn of light

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    THEY KISSED THEY KISSED THEY KISSED
    sarah is so adorable
    HARRY OMG AHHHH
    i love how sarah wants to "feel" perfect but I think she's amazing
    November 9th, 2013 at 11:43pm
  • Moments-of-Courage

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    Not going to lie, I chuckled at the last bit with the eyeball, because I have to admit that I've actually done that a few times, not realizing how close it was to my face and all of that jazz hahaha

    In any case, Sarah is kind of embarrassing, but she has every right to be. Girl, I wouldn't know what to do with myself if any of that happened and I was with my father. It was hard enough going through that stuff with my mother because she likes to tell the whole world about everything haha. In any case, I admire her....bravery?....I guess is the right world. I wouldn't have been able to muster up the courage to ask for stuff like that.

    Gah, he's leaving in August.....makes me sad, but you go girl, doing those things for yourself. :P

    Anyway, I should probably get going. But, anyway, wonderful chapter as always you equally as wonderful creature ^_^
    November 5th, 2013 at 01:38pm
  • bxgurl95

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    Yea we've definitely been there, trying to figure out what to do to be mature and look like all of the other girls around us. Especially at this age, it's such a time of transition.
    I love this story! Their relationship is so young but it makes me nostalgic lol
    Can't wait for more
    November 5th, 2013 at 05:09am
  • besidethesea.

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    SARAH! Stop it you adorable person you! Am I the only one who caught that Taylor Swift song reference in the authors note? Because I did...;) haha :) Amazing update as always! Can't wait for more! :)
    November 5th, 2013 at 03:45am
  • bxgurl95

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    That was so incredibly sweet! That sounds like something a couple of young teenagers would do. Lol "Deflowering King"
    Absolutely worth the wait I absolutely love your writing!
    October 28th, 2013 at 04:05am
  • Moments-of-Courage

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    *whimpers* God, they are so cute, and I just love it so much. I shouldn't be reading at all because I have so much work to do this week.....but, I saw that you updated, and my mind wouldn't stop nagging me until I read it, and here I am.....just gushing over the adorable sweetness. I just love, love, love it. I can never get enough of it haha. It makes my heart swell with feels because of how cute it is. And the rules?! Girl, that was so cute and funny at the same time, because it only reminds me of how young they are, yet how mature they are as well. I am kind of sad about the whole deadline of the relationship, and when I say sad, I mean that I feel how Sarah must feel. Like that pit in your stomach, knowing that good things like that won't last, but yet still having hope that it will despite all odds. haha Anyway, thanks for putting a smile on my face. I always love to read things from you for that purpose. Your characters always stir some kind of feelings in me, and I can never explain it haha. Oh well, I should probably get back to my math and all of that jazz that I don't want to do because my brain is just over-tired from this weekend. Thank you again, love. It was a wonderful update. I can't wait for you to see the story I'm working on. I'm hoping to keep it a surprise until you come back. It will be something for you to look forward to ^_^ What day are you supposed to move back anyway? I love you, my Irish potato! Keep being absolutely awesome! ♥
    October 27th, 2013 at 11:42pm
  • ButterGirl96

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    Aw they are just too cute! I want more plz!
    October 27th, 2013 at 03:31pm
  • justSJ

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    update? Smile
    October 27th, 2013 at 01:43am
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    Dude, that gif of Harry is swoon worthy! (: This is just fantastic. But when are your stories not fantastic? Hehe.
    UPDATE! <3
    October 17th, 2013 at 04:38pm
  • dawn of light

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    WELL ISN'T HARRY JUST THE SWEETEST
    oksy i love him so much
    HE'S SO ROMANTIC
    and sarah hehehehehe my dear sarah
    A YEAR ISN'T THAT MUCH OF A DIFFERENCE RIGHT
    okay she drew him
    and he wrote about her
    it's just so beautiful
    LET ME LOVE HIM
    okay ilysm
    October 11th, 2013 at 08:56pm
  • justSJ

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    Hope you update soon! Smile
    October 6th, 2013 at 07:14am
  • pistols

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    Moreeeee. <3
    October 3rd, 2013 at 01:59pm
  • Moments-of-Courage

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    Sarah is me...like...a younger version of me, which I didn't expect, but a version of me nonetheless......just...the awkward and the everything hahahahaha. I loved the cuteness ^_^ You are wonderful...I think I've said this before. Well, I had some time, while I ate breakfast, to read. And, this made my terrible morning a whole lot better, love. So, thank you. I absolutely love love love this story. I don't know why, but it is just the right amount of sweet and awkward and just kjdfvnlkadjnkgjbarsjba...Anyway, thanks for making my morning a little better. Now, I must hurry off to get ready for work. I wish I didn't have to, but such is my life. I'll talk to you later, potato! Have an awesome day! ^_^
    September 28th, 2013 at 04:45pm