Adorable chapter! You and your cliffhangers though lol. WHY. I'm guessing...exboyfriend that Brian will get to beat the ever-loving crap out of? I do enjoy when that happens lmao. Thank you for updating!
Oh Brian. Way to be a dag and ruin a girl's birthday. At least he went after her though. Leaving it until the next day would have just made things worse. I`m excited to read the next chapter! And PLEASE. Knowing you, it will be more than SORT OF good. You silly.
@ fairjer0620 Your welcome. I mean, I liked it so I took the time to read it. And I know what you mean about the criticism. And I will continue reading this whenever it gets updated. So you haven't lost me because of it.
@ xSweet.Afterlifex I know, right? I hate that it was so just....uuggghhhh, but I wanted to get something out before I went crazy. Especially since my Matt stories are a bit stalled out, and I'm winding down "Come Away With Me." What'll probably happen is I'll go back and reread it, then rewrite it, then repost it, but for now it's something. And something is better than nothing. Thanks for the comment, constructive criticism is always helpful, and at least I know it isn't just me who had trouble.
Loved it, but this chapter was kinda hard to read. I managed through it, but everything was run together.
Don't get me wrong I did love it. Especially the part with Pinkly. And I think she seemed a little uneasy with the whole, "You're one of us now" comment.