Just a Kiss - Comments

Well. A druggie mother. I was not expecting that! THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE

Adorable chapter! You and your cliffhangers though lol. WHY. I'm guessing...exboyfriend that Brian will get to beat the ever-loving crap out of? I do enjoy when that happens lmao. Thank you for updating!

Loved this! I'm now up to date and I'm dying to know who's at the door. Is it her mother? Her father? An ex? God, please update soon xx

God. He just has the best way with words, doesn't he? :P Super cute chapter! Loved it.

thaaat was a cute chapter :3 I'm so glad that they started dating yeeeey!

awww she gave him a chance. he better not be a douche nozzle. love the update.

Jdkskkwn I love this. The suspense of that last chapter....can't wait to see what happens :)

Damn you Brian - but I'm glad he didn't go home with the blonde - hurry and update please!!

Oh Brian. Way to be a dag and ruin a girl's birthday. At least he went after her though. Leaving it until the next day would have just made things worse. I`m excited to read the next chapter! And PLEASE. Knowing you, it will be more than SORT OF good. You silly.

Love this so far :) looking forward to more!!! Brian is such a sweetie in this!!!

@ fairjer0620
Your welcome. I mean, I liked it so I took the time to read it. And I know what you mean about the criticism. And I will continue reading this whenever it gets updated. So you haven't lost me because of it.

@ xSweet.Afterlifex
I know, right? I hate that it was so just....uuggghhhh, but I wanted to get something out before I went crazy. Especially since my Matt stories are a bit stalled out, and I'm winding down "Come Away With Me." What'll probably happen is I'll go back and reread it, then rewrite it, then repost it, but for now it's something. And something is better than nothing. Thanks for the comment, constructive criticism is always helpful, and at least I know it isn't just me who had trouble.

Loved it, but this chapter was kinda hard to read. I managed through it, but everything was run together.

Don't get me wrong I did love it. Especially the part with Pinkly. And I think she seemed a little uneasy with the whole, "You're one of us now" comment.

Okay, I adore Fiona already. She's a nurse, like me, so yay! Brian is such a sweetheart. I am so looking forward to reading more about them!

And hey, if you ever decide you want another layout don't hesitate to ask! I'd be more than happy to do it for you <3

I love that song, so I already know I'm going to love this story. The fact that it's you writing it just adds to that. It's so cute already.

Wow, loved this.

Can't wait to read more.

love this! i adore your stories!

I really liked this :) can't wait to read more!

I really enjoyed the start! Keep it coming :)