Just a Kiss - Comments

@ pawnsinplay
So, the story of my diagnosis. is long and drawn out, but I'll sum it up. I was in my final year at college, going through my internship in a fourth grade classroom. To say shit was crazy, is an understatement. The short is that while I was in high school I got really sick and lost a lot of weight really quick, the first manifestation of my disease though it wasn't known to be that at the time. During my internship those symptoms returned along with pain in my left side (which was later attributed to an embolism that resolved itself) anyway, it was 3 days before Christmas and a week after I graduated college, I was 25 and told I had a disease that was both rare and seemed extensive at the time.

From then on my life became about getting healthy.

My pregnancy was 3 years of planning and mine months of worries and waiting. Given the nature of the damage done to my aorta, I was very high risk. But I had a huge team of some of the best doctors, both on and off the main scene and things went so much better than ever expected.

What a beautiful chapter. I'm sort of glad that you didn't write the entire funeral. I think it would have been too much, emotion wise, and just skimming over it the way you did is amazing. And I'm glad the phone call from Brian's dad in the previous chapter wasn't for bad news haha I was so worried! It was sweet of Brian's family to fly down for the funeral. But now I'd worried again because of the police showing up. My first thought was: holy, holy, holy crap, did that idiot Joseph go to the police to try to press assault charges against Brian or some such malarcky? But no, I'm choosing to believe that that isn't what happened because neither of them can handle that crap, so it must be because of her mother. Right? RIGHT?!

I had no idea you had vasculitis. That just blows my mind. You're so young, especially to have a form that's so damn rare and somewhat unknown. Do you mind if I ask how old you were when you were diagnosed? And I imagine your pregnancy must have been considered high risk because of it, right?

Oh I know what you mean! I have a heart condition so any little sniffle or cough can just knock me on my arse for days and days. I don't bounce back from being sick like the average person, my body tends to take it to the extreme haha. Constantly being run down from working straight nights in an ER doesn't help I suppose but I love what I do so that's that, right? I hope you and your boy feel better soon!

You're right though, life is never that perfect fairytale. I have a hard time with those stories that are. Like yeah, it's nice to read about fluffy and sweet things but I need that realistic aspect too, I need those curveballs and that drama that get in the way if life. That's why I love your stories so much. They have everything I love in a story c:

@ pawnsinplay
I'm sorry you've been sick, sweetie! It seems to go around. Logan has had major sinus cohesion since we got back from all the traveling we did last month: Colorado to see my parents, Virginia Beach to see my husband's godparents and Logan's honorary grandpa and grandma, and then Idaho to visit my sister in law and her husband. It was a crazy two and a half weeks to be sure and it had me all out of sorts too. (But with my autoimmune disease things can easily go wonky for me. )

Thanks for your comments! I'm so glad you're enjoying this roller coaster I've put these two on for the time being. I wanted this story to be fluffy but not unrealistic. Life isn't perfect, and even in a fantasy world to much perfection makes for a boring story (in my opinion) that says the same thing over and over just in different words.

I hadn't intended to have such an intense love scene, but I stayed writing and it just kind of took off with a mind of its own. Besides, sometimes the best affirmation of life when faced with death, can only be found in the act of making love. Am I right? Besides, I can't help but see these two as an ultra sensual couple.

I'm rambling!

This is a really good story keep going !!!

amazing story! please update again soon.

OMG I MISSED SO MUCH. I'm so sorry that I haven't commented, I read the first update very briefly but didn't have the chance to leave a comment. I've been swamped with work and being sick. I had planned on leaving a proper comment after my own update but got tied up and then you updated again and BAH I'M SORRY. But I just read them both (again) so here I am, leaving an overdue comment.

I knew Brian was going to propose sooner or later and was worried that Fiona would stall and make up excuses about him not wanting to be with someone who has a crazy mother. I've never been so excited about being wrong because SHE SAID YES. But then she found out about her gma and that just broke my heart. I didn't think her mom was crazy enough to kill her own mother over money. I just wanted to cry for Fiona, and for Brian because he's grieving too and what hurts her, hurts him. The whole gang going down to be around for the funeral is really sweet. What a chapter though, seriously. Only YOU can make me so excited I'm grinning like a fool and wanting to squeal and in the next second, I'm heartbroken and just wanting to hug everyone, and then two paragraphs later I'm like "...hot dayum". Seriously. Brilliant.

And on to the next update! WHAT IS WRONG WITH THAT GUY. He needs a reality check. Newsflash buddy, it's the 21st century, keeping your wife pregnant and in the kitchen and dictating her every move is frowned upon nowadays. Creep. I love when Brian and the guys get all protective and gruff and angry, it makes me happier than it probably should. But at least the elders aren't going to butt their noses into the issue. I'm glad that Fiona finally let go a bit with Rosie. With trying so hard to keep it together and put up a brave front, I was worried she was going to have a breakdown of some sort - which would not have been good for her, or Brian for that matter. I can't even imagine how hard the funeral is going to be. AND HEY. Whatever happened with the phone call that Brian got from his dad? Did something actually happen with their house, or did her mom show up again? I really hope she's found before she tries to do anything to Fiona...but this is a story written by you so...more drama ahead? :P

LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER. I HOPE THIS SUPER LONG AND RAMBLING COMMENT MAKES UP FOR EVERYTHING <333

aww! poor fi, poor pops and poor nann! ):

Happy they got engaged though (:
Lol Joseph's crazy.

Sheezus! That Aimee is an absolute nut job. I'm so glad she didn't hurt Fiona or the guys and I hope she goes to jail. That bathroom scene though...yowza! I hope Brian asks her soon! And I really hope nothing happens with her mother but I think I know you we'll enough to know it will haha. Loved this chapter!

ANOTHER UPDATE, YAY! I'm so relieved that things are okay with Zacky. I never believed for a minute that he was cheating but still, his behavior and comments were just off. But they're okay, thank God! NOW PLEASE GIVE US SOME MORE BRIAN AND FIONA <333

Also. Good job on being all emotional while putting your boy down to sleep. Sounds like something I would do :P

How embarrassing for Fiona! Jimmy really needs to engage brain before speaking .

Zacky should've thought twice before saying that to Kristen. He's gonna need to make it up to her.

Please update soon xx

Zacky better straighten that out quick! Poor Fiona...that's so embarrassing for her, clearly.

...what the crap.

So much drama in one chapter! Everyone's just in shit now. LOVED IT.

Wow. That was just...hot and romantic and super intense. and breathtakingly beautiful.

Probably one of the sweetest and sexiest chapters ever. I loved it. I have a feeling there's more drama to come though. I hope I'm wrong. Thanks for the update!

Awesome! Just awesome! I loved this chapter. It was just so intimate and romantic. It was sexy and beautiful. You could just sense the love between them.

More soon please xx

Brian has the most perfect way with words, I swear to God. I loved his little confrontation with that a-hole Grant. He's such a sweetheart though, especially at the end, I think I melted.

God they're perfect together! I loved the exchange between Brian and Grant too!

Please update as soon as possible xx

Well I had a feeling her scumbag mother would do that! I'm glad she moved in with Brian.

I hope you can update again soon xx

I knew her mother was going to pull crap like that. Poor Brian must have been in a panic. Thank God she wasn't home when it happened and wasn't hurt! I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of her mom, though, or her druggie friends. And what about that ex boyfriend, sheesh! Loved this update!