Night Is Gotham - Comments

The comment swap brought me here.

First I will say that I liked the customized layout, but I felt that the text was a little small. The first chapter was pretty interesting and I will admit the only one that I read. It caught my interest, but it didn't give much away. Which is probably good to get people to read further, but since I only read the first chapter and your summary didn't give much away I still wasn't sure what sort of fic I was reading.

Still loving this. :)

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Batman has never really been a thing for me, but making a plot like this with the daughter makes it really interesting. I love stories like these where there are back stories that no one really knows about. Just wow. I really love the detail. Most stories aren't as detailed and as well descriptive as yours. Again its amazing. Keep writing your very talented!

I've never read a Batman fan fiction before nor have I ever really been in that fandom, but I love the idea of him having a daughter who knows nothing of his 'double' life. You have very good grammar and spelling but in the first chapter, I don't know if you meant to spell yeah like 'ya' that's my only question. Also, I liked how at first you think Evelyn is flirting with Mark when she takes the blue binder away and runs, it kind of makes me wonder if he has a thing for her as well. And I love the curiosity when he rings the door bell. Keep up the good work! :)

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So I don't normally read stories having to do with Batman, but I must say I enjoy this one. I love the detail you put into your plot and how you portray Bruce Wayne. I didn't see many grammatical errors, and I really love how simple, yet intriguing your layout is. Something I'd like to point out is that you should separate dialogue from your paragraphs so it's easier for us to read. Otherwise, amazing job!!

Okay, first of all, I have yet to come across a fanfic that portrays Bruce Wayne as such a monstrous father! I am actually loving this Bruce because I'm wanting to see how Evelyn grows as a character under his thumb. This story has me curious, what the hell is going to helped next? Also, I love your characters, Mark is a sweetheart but I just have this itching feeling that he's not to be trusted. Perhaps the boy next door is actually a bad boy? Haha I don't really know what to expect and it's pretty refreshing

I love this. I LOVE THIS!!

O.M.G. You MUST .....update this like...now. Haha I love this. I'm so glad I finally got around to reading it. I have my ideals about what is going on...although I must say Bruce is a bit of a dick lol. He needs a good spanking! Mark sounds dreamy.

I really love this story, and I really want to know about the dad! Also, I wanna know about Evelyn and Mark ;) I usually don't read things dealing with hereos or anything like that but this caught my attention! I'm glad I read it and don't regret it either! Keep up the great work!

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Your summary really pulls the reader in. I like how you characterize Batman. Your writing style is very smooth and it has an air of mystery. I didn't see many grammatical errors. One thing I must tell you is to separate paragraphs from dialogue so it is easier for the reader to understand.

Otherwise than that, you have a good story here and it has a lot of potential.

i really enjoyed reading your story

It made me sad to hear that Mrs. Wayne is a booberry. But I do like pasta. Maybe I'll go eat pasta.

i got really into that! haha Im not that into batman and supper hero's but i really like the way you write so i might be getting a feel for something knew who knows? :) ill keep reading

i got really into that! haha Im not that into batman and supper hero's but i really like the way you write so i might be getting a feel for something knew who knows? :) ill keep reading

Omg what's wrong with BATMAN!? :(

Really interesting story!

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I love, love, love this story! The way it was written, the voice throughout the piece. I'm super excited about it too, the idea of it an all. I think the way you portrayed Batman was different and it expanded upon what I had expected. I think it was great and I think you're a great writer.

Oh. My. Goodness. This is about the tenth time I've been brought to your story by comment swap. I am SO sorry, I totally understand if you hate me haha.

I keep getting you for comment swap! I'm so sorry!!

I still adore your story and I can tell how devoted you are to this story.

Every aspect of this book I love, and I honestly wouldn't change anything :)

Even though Batman's already a character, you've characterized him to where I love him even more <3 :D

You end your chapters in just the right way, leaving me hungry for more of your magnificent writing :)

God Bless!!

xoxo

Olivia Laurence

Oh. My. Goodness. This is about the tenth time I've been brought to your story by comment swap. I am SO sorry, I totally understand if you hate me haha.

I keep getting you for comment swap! I'm so sorry!!

I still adore your story and I can tell how devoted you are to this story.

Every aspect of this book I love, and I honestly wouldn't change anything :)

Even though Batman's already a character, you've characterized him to where I love him even more <3 :D

You end your chapters in just the right way, leaving me hungry for more of your magnificent writing :)

God Bless!!

xoxo

Olivia Laurence

Comment swap brought me here, I really like this, I love the layout and the name, it's such a good story to read, I've recommended and I'm definitely going to subscribe, I want to read more! Thank you for giving me something brilliant to read, in my hours of boredom, keep up the great work! :)