Night Is Gotham - Comments

I keep getting you for comment swap! I'm so sorry!!

I still adore your story and I can tell how devoted you are to this story.

Every aspect of this book I love, and I honestly wouldn't change anything :)

Even though Batman's already a character, you've characterized him to where I love him even more <3 :D

You end your chapters in just the right way, leaving me hungry for more of your magnificent writing :)

God Bless!!

xoxo

Olivia Laurence

I keep getting you for comment swap! I'm so sorry!!

I still adore your story and I can tell how devoted you are to this story.

Every aspect of this book I love, and I honestly wouldn't change anything :)

Even though Batman's already a character, you've characterized him to where I love him even more <3 :D

You end your chapters in just the right way, leaving me hungry for more of your magnificent writing :)

God Bless!!

xoxo

Olivia Laurence

So that’s how he got in. Oh, I like this batman so much. He is just so wicked. And as always you leave me curious, very, very curious.

I apologize for the repeat comment my internet glitched and started having a mind of its own.

*comment swap* not much of a batman fan but this story caught me off guard. Its a strange way to picture him. He's always protecting and serving for justice. yet to see him abusive its interesting. I love you back ground keep going this story its got potential

*comment swap* not much of a batman fan but this story caught me off guard. Its a strange way to picture him. He's always protecting and serving for justice. yet to see him abusive its interesting. I love you back ground keep going this story its got potential

*comment swap* not much of a batman fan but this story caught me off guard. Its a strange way to picture him. He's always protecting and serving for justice. yet to see him abusive its interesting. I love you back ground keep going this story its got potential

[Comment Swap] I really enjoy your writing style, your summary really drew me in. Despite the dark beginning with the abusive father, the story really has a sense of something uplifting is going to happen.

@ pillowsnfeathers17
hahaha no problem with hating batman, he's not everyones cup of tea. sorry you had to read this for the comment swap though, but thank you for muddling through though.

Comment Swap :)
I'm not gonna lie to you...I hate batman! Some people would kill me for saying that, but really I don't like him at all. That being said, this fanfic is still pretty interesting. I've only read the first two chapters, but from what I can tell you've done a good job at grasping the mysterious element. My only issue with the layout is that the paragraphs are kind of hard to read because they are a little long, but obviously layouts have nothing to do with quality of writing. Basically, you've done a nice job so far, even though I seriously hate batman :)

*Comment Swap*
I haven't read a batman fic before so this was quite a interesting read. I liked how you manage to create suspense and intrigue the reader. The paragraphs are a bit too long and kind of difficult to read though. Either way this is very well written. Great job!

Now how did he get in? And what's gonna happen? And you are still driving me nuts

Ah, I've finally gotten the chance to read this. Sorry I didn't comment sooner, my sister's boyfriend has been on the computer playing a game. He had to work today, so I could finally sit down and finish out my comment swaps.

I'm gonna start off with the layout. I've gotta say, it's perfect for a batman story. It's simple and dark, yet elegant so it has the perfect allure to it. It's also easy to read, so that's a major plus. I seem to be finding a lot of stories lately were the fonts are a bit smaller so I have to strain a little, but with yours, I don't.

So far, I've only read the first chapter and a part of the second, but before I went any further I figured I should comment. :) I really like how you've portrayed Mark so far. You don't give away too many details, but you do give just enough away to make it very easy to visualize him. I like his personality so far. He has that friendly yet annoying attitude about him, but he's not entirely a complete jerk, or he hasn't shown to be so far. This blue binder has caught my attention.

What's in it? Why are they being so secretive?

I was only read the first paragraph of the second chapter and it's very clear that something is offsetting about her dad and I'm going to go read and figure out what happens when I'm done typing this comment. I haven't seen any grammar mistakes, typos or anything, so if you have a beta or you're editing this yourself then they/you are doing. Either that or you are just so awesome that you don't have to edit your chapters all that much. :)

Anyways, I love this story so far. You've got a new subscriber! Now I'm going back to read the rest. :) Keep up the great work!

@ Morrissey
Your stories are magnificent, I consider them works of art. I'll be updating a lot in the next week as my family is taking a trip to Michigan (which i detest) and I will have a lot of free time to write. I'm glad you like it so far, stay tuned for more!

You are actually doing something that I could never do, writing proper stories, therefore I bow my head. You created the suspense and mystery in the first chapter luring me in. And then the second chapter left me more curious, so I read the third and the fourth I am still curious , it’s driving me nuts.

hm, i actually do not have a solution other than the ones you have already executed. maybe try googling to see if anyone else has had to same problem?

@ gabe saporta.
i'm not exactly sure how to fix the spacing issue, i've tried double, even triple spacing between paragraphs and it doesn't change a thing. as far as the corrections go i'm going through and editing now, but if you have any advice on how to fix spacing that would be helpful

hello, i was anticipating reading this since you had read mind and i did find a few mistakes which i find to be minor and just simple errors that we as humans make.

In the summary it says "They way..." when it should say "the way..."

"doorframe arms crossed in front of me. Mark looked up at me as if confused as to why I was still stand..." should be "door frame, arms crossed in front of me. Mark looked up at me as if confused as to why I was still stand..."

"the room. As cute as I thought he..." should be "the room, or ; as cute as I thought he..."

"his hands and run with it..." should be "his hands and ran with it..."

last but not least it should be "street." not "street,"

also the paragraphs being so close to each other is sort of distracting, try double spacing or perhaps indenting every new paragraph?

lovely read besides all those easily made mistakes, thank you for the pleasure of reading your story and sorry i only read the first chapter love.

@ di-nex
oh shit! i didn't even notice the your you're mix up! i'm slightly embarrassed. i'll go fix that right now, and i notice your avatar is danisnotonfire... i love him

I was sent here by the Comment Swap.

So, first of all - cool layout! I really like it.
I'm not familiar with Batman background, so it wa strange and at times confusing to read your work. Despite that, I liked what you have written so far, because it's quite gripping and intriguing. I'd like to know more about Evelyn's mother, though.
However, I have noticed some mistakes:
1. Chapter 1 - "“You’re dad isn’t home is he?”" - should be "your" not "you're".
2. Chapter 2 - "creek open" - I think it whould be "crack open"

Good luck!