Putting The Dog To Sleep - Comments

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I think you have an idea on what you want to try to get across to the readers, but honestly I am have a hard time trying to get a firm grasp on what is supposed to be going on. You are skipping around and that is pretty confusing to me because she loves him and then she doesn't. The words you use are pretty accurate to the way you are using them in your writing. You writing is short but I can tell you are trying to get your idea of the story across. Keep up the good work and I hope you continue writing.

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I must honestly say that I have a vague idea of what's going on but couldn't really follow it... My adhd makes it hard enough to read the stories I'm interested in and this was just... weird? I don't know I had to skip and then tried to go back and it was just confusing to me

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I must honestly say that I have a vague idea of what's going on but couldn't really follow it... My adhd makes it hard enough to read the stories I'm interested in and this was just... weird? I don't know I had to skip and then tried to go back and it was just confusing to me

Hi, comment swapper here! This is very... different. I like it! It makes it a little confusing and I felt disconnected to the story, but as I read on it became a little bit more clear. I love your writing style and the description was amazing. :)

Comment swap brought me here! Oh my im happy it did! Normally im not into stories that are told in such short bits at a time but i didnt let that turn me away from this story! I actually approve of this writing style for this story! It makes it very mysterious..... at first i had a hard time understanding what this was about (i can be quite slow sometimes.) But as i kept reading i began to understand it more! And i think that is a great quality! Because it is so mysterious and the readers at first arent sure what is happening, it draws them in and makes reading more intense. Im loving this story!

It is compleeeeete! It didn't take me too long to figure out the jist. I feel so accomplished. Mehehe. But you did a wonderful job here. The way you chose to tell the story leaves enough hints for those who are looking and ultimately it's a rather tragic and haunting one. D: Sigh.

I look forward to seeing more from you~ :]

Im sorry but this story is not any good "chapters" 1-10 should all be the prologue and all together make no sense. even in an abstract way. `the rest is still very short and disconnected. this needs to be longer, make sense to someone besides yourself. sorry but its not very good. contact me however when you extend it. i'd like to see how it goes because your writing is quite creative.

I love how this is in vague, a little disconnected fragments. Each little piece creates little scenes in my head and I'm picturing Morrissey to be rather funny looking. lol. I'm so curious about him though, as well as Lucy and the third character. How exactly do they fit together?

But the entire first part is so intriguing. A person must read on for more pieces of the puzzle. Morrissey is kind of a dick, but I want to see what his deal is. :] I'm definitely subscribing to see this to the end.

I am so glad that you've been updating. I'm still confused to the plot of the story, but I really am loving this so much. Your writing is so poetic, just wow.

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I legitimately have no idea what just happened, but I really loved it. Your writing is beautiful and each word serves an important purpose in telling the story, even if I still have no clue what the story actually is. I found myself rereading each chapter at least once, and each time I pictured something different. So regardless of my confusion, your writing is stellar.

I love how you write. I think it is amazing. I can't wait for more.

I really like the way this is written,its very unique,and it keeps me interested in the story.a lot of times i find myself loosing interest in stories im reading, but this story was very attention grasping.You seem like a very good writer,and i hope you continue writing :)

Haunting. You have a way with words and analogies that seems fresh. I like the writing style you used, it almost read like poetry.

Hey, I love this story.

I saw you updated and came back and read everything you've posted so far. It just keeps getting better and better and I just love reading this. This might be the only story I've read on mibba where I will go back and read from beginning to end a couple of times just because I love it so much. This story is inspiring me to make some new artwork and I will definitely show my products to you once i finish them. you're wonderful keep updating, hope to read more soon!

oh and you mentioned me in an authors note and i died :D you're lovely

Hi! Comment swap brought me here!

This is probably the most unique story I've ever come across. You're using the 2nd person point of view (using you for narration most of the time) and I love that, because I'm certain that no other story I've read on Mibba uses that point of view. And I love how you've made each chapter short and sweet! This was a breath of fresh air to read! Keep the chapters coming, you're doing great!

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This was quite a interesting read. I like your writing style. I found it unique. The story itself is extremely unique. Your chapters are short but each one really has a lot of meaning. All in all good job!

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This was quite a interesting read. I like your writing style. I found it unique. The story itself is extremely unique. Your chapters are short but each one really has a lot of meaning. All in all good job!

You are such an amazing author, your description drew me in immediately and that's a great aspect t have in your story. The simplicity of the layout fits the underlying tones and meanings of your story and I really do love that. Nobody writes like you and I love that, you are such a natural, gifted writer and I can't wait to see not only where the story goes, but you as a writer, because I can tell you have a passion for it and it's evident through your writing. Never change, because you're magnificent!

God Bless!!

Olivia

So I know I already commented, but when I saw that this was updated I just had to come back and read it. The chapter is short, but I like that. It makes it so much more enjoyable to read this when you don't have pages and pages of writing. It's short and sweet. Although I did find one mistake, or maybe you meant for it to read like that, I don't know but shouldn't,
''leaving bad taste'' be leaving a bad taste? Anyway, the end of that chapter was so sweet, can't wait for more!