And Then There Was You - Comments

Gah I love this story so much! It's so intense! Please update soon I can't wait till their date

Wow, he had the balls to go tell Zacky? Jeez, he’s lucky Zack didn’t smack him for Brian… haha.

But I get why he needed to talk to someone about what’s going on. It’s getting complicated already (and it’s barely even begun) so he definitely needs to hash it out with someone that has a clear head on his shoulders.

“You can tell Brian you hesitated before defiling his baby sister.”

Bahahaha! Zacky is quite witty, isn’t he? Haha.

“I can’t have you justifying this, ok? And don’t say statutory rape ever again.”

Hahahaha! Poor Matt, he really wants to hear the negative reasons why he can’t pursue McKenna and Zacky just isn’t helping. Except for making a point of saying Brian will kill him, but that doesn’t seem to be enough of an excuse by this point. Haha.

“… It’s bound to be fucked up and awkward.”

Well, that’s an understatement, Zack! I can’t imagine anyone else taking it as well as what he is… the other guys will probably be extremely weirded out by the whole thing. And they won’t be subtle about it, either. Haha.

I love how he’s yelling at her for liking him back and she’s just calmly trying to invite him. It’s so cute and amusing. He really is torn over this thing between them, but maybe he’s getting a little too caught up in his head. I mean, it’s not like he’s in love with her… it doesn’t happen that easily. He’s just incredibly attracted to her right now and maybe after they’ve fooled around, he can feel like he’s got it out of his system… as long as feelings don’t end developing, of course. And I can’t help but feel that’s exactly what will happen. Haha.

Cute how she has pictures of them in her dorm room… and who can blame her for saying Matt is her boyfriend? I’d want people to think that too!

Him reminiscing about when they painted her room gives me mixed feelings. Whilst I find it cute that they did that for her (and also very amusing that they were high and giggled whenever Zack farted hahaha) it’s makes things seem a little weird now, that they’re taking things to a whole other level. It brings back that awkwardness… but good that Matt isn’t feeling it.

I’m glad they didn’t just jump straight in and bonk each other’s brains out. I like that they’re able to take a step back and do things the right/rational sort of way. It stops it from being cheap and tawdry, gives this thing between them substance. And I like that.

I wonder what she’s going to tell her parents when they wonder where she was all night…? Coz even though she’s an adult, they’d still be concerned if she wasn’t around all night. Haha.

Looking forward to more! Can’t wait!

@ NathanSykes' Swag
I'm so sorry! Your comment was much appreciated! :)

I'm seriously in love with the story line already <3 please update again soon <3

I loved this chapter, Matt is such a sweet hearted Teddy bear. I can't wait to see the next chapter!

P.S. you totally forgot to shout me out, I commented on the previous chapter. But it's all good, people make mistakes ^.^

Wow, I loved this.

Although, why do I get this weird feeling that McKenna's told her Mom that she's into Matt as more than a friend? Don't know why but, I just get that vibe.

And way to go Zack... I mean seriously, are you trying to get Matt killed?

I can't wait for more. Please update as soon as you can.

I love this! Poor Matt , he really is wrestling with his feelings, whereas McKenna's just like "fuck it"! I'm really looking forward to the next part. Oh and I loved the line: "Matt Sanders you romantic bastard". Made me smile, that did xx

McKenna and Matt, that's a pairing I've never read before and not a pairing I expected to enjoy, but only two chapters in and this story has me hooked! I love how easy going McKenna is while Matt is over there sweating bullets, being tempted, and trying to restrain himself. He's already failing the job so I anticipate some problems in the future. Oh, and that picture of him in the banner, just kill me. Dimples for days *-* Great start, can't wait to read more!

Really liking this story so far! Matt is so cute in this and McKenna is hilarious. It's almost as though Matt is the younger one with the way he is acting! Can't wait to read more and I'm definitely going to check out some of your other work :)

I love how Mac is in this story! So aggressive like Brian!! Matt is in deep and they could have a good relationship! It will be interesting when Brian and the guys find out! Keep writing! I love this story!!

Oh bless his little cotton socks! Matt's all nervous and shy around her, that's so sweet! I agree with the other comments, it's SO gonna happen soon, Mac's got balls! Haha.

I've fallen in love with this story already, just like the others. I just love the way you write, a good balance of detail and dialogue, which I have to say is hilarious at times! I like Matt's inner dialogue too, that's funny! The way you described their kisses was so hot! For your first het story, this is really good! I just know it is going to be incredible!

I can't wait to see how this will all pan out, and how much Brian is going to hurt him for making out with his little sister! Somehow, I can see Brian Jr being more pissed off than Brian Sr.

“I’m, uh. I’m just. Standing here,” he fumbled.
Oh Matt! Hahahahah!

Very much looking forward to the next instalment! :D

Haha I laughed when she took her shirt off and Matt turned around and he was all like "I'm just standing here" haha great chapter!! McKenna certainly knows what she wants. Looking forward to more :)

Bahaha! I love that he was too drunk and actually forgot to try anything on McKenna… too funny. Alcohol actually saved him from making a dick of himself… that rarely if ever happens!

His nervousness is so incredibly cute, too. It’s hard to imagine a man like Matt being nervous (considering he gets up on stage in front of thousands of people sometimes daily) but it’s nice to see he’s still capable of being insecure. Especially over a girl who is 15 years his junior. There’s something about that makes his crush almost innocent… almost. Haha.

The discussion about Val and Matt’s failed marriage is sad. I can’t imagine how difficult it would be to have been with someone for almost twenty years just to end up divorced and feeling like you’re starting all over again. I suppose the positives out of it is that he’s only 35 (almost) instead of 45… plus he’s incredibly hot and really, what girl wouldn’t want to love him? Hahaha.

Wow! Go McKenna! I really didn’t expect them to kiss so soon… let alone after her telling him that she’s known he wanted to kiss her since the party. Sheesh! The girls got balls… so to speak. Good on her!

Whoa… they are like a pair of horny teenagers up there on that ferris wheel! Well, I suppose she’s not that far off being exactly that… and guys generally always have sexual desires like that of a teenager. I like how you didn’t have them kiss and it be all “yeah, let’s go!” and have him forget about all his concerns… it’s much more realistic the way you did it. I like that he’s still very hesitant and keeps bringing up the age gap and her family wanting to destroy him if they found out. Those are things he should be concerned about, especially at this stage when it’s more about carnal lust, than feelings for each other.

”… It'd be better for me if you didn't think about my brother or my dad."

Bahahahaha! I think it’d be better for Matt, too. Especially since they’re a family that do resemble one another… haha

Hahaha, they’re too cute with their insistence that they won’t sleep with each other. And so in denial! It’s gonna happen… sooner or later, it’s soooo gonna happen. McKenna will break his resolve and make him forget about all the cons of this situation long enough to get her some. Haha.

I do look forward to seeing how this is all gonna play out… especially since I didn’t expect them to start the tug of sex war so soon. And call me crazy, but I’m also looking forward to seeing how it goes down when/if Brian (and everyone else) finds out… ; )

McKenna is a little minx . Poor Matt, he didn't know what to do or say for the best half the time! I'm really looking forward to the next part and when Brian finds out .... Well, there's certainly trouble ahead, I can feel it in my bones

Please update again as soon as you can xx

.... Dude Brian is gonna murder him. You don't mess with a guys baby sister. No matter what.

And something tells me, anything McKenna is gonna say is going to get ignored. I can not wait to read more of this.

Please soon!

Aha I fuckin loved this chapter! Mckenna is a trip! I was laughin at how Matt was trying to contain himself the whole chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter

Haha, I love Mckenna, she is trouble!! I kinda fear for Matt though, he is right, if the guys or anyone else found out they would probably string him up by his nads. Me thinks this will end badly, but I'm betting its going to be a lot of fun getting there.

Love this!!! To be honest, a lot of it made me grin, some parts made me laugh, but I did bust out laughing about Brian being a giggly drunk. That was epic.

I'm so glad I've gotten back into reading as well as continuing to write, because I've found some stories that make me smile and that I love. This being one of them.

I really hope you update soon. And I know no matter what it'll be worth the wait!

OH and for the record... I totally see Brian trying to tear Matt to pieces.

@ Damsel Of Darkness
Great comments! Pretty much everything I loved about this too!! I'm excited for this story!

Yes!!!! I'm so glad you went there! I have missed your writing!! And I guessed about two paragraphs in, but wasn't entirely sure until Zacky cornered him. I love this so much already!!! Can't wait for more:D