Even the Sun Sets in Paradise - Comments

Thank you billions. This comment made my day. I did love the Paris scene and I know exactly where you're coming from, that would be my perfect fantasy aswell. Thanks again <3

I loved loved LOVED this story !!!! The most intriguing character to me was Cyrus cus every part he was in left me on the edge of my seat cus he was so mysterious I kept thinking something more was going to happen. My favorite character is Layton he's the bad boy every girl wants but he's not perfect and that's humbling he's romantic sweet human just amazing ! My favorite part was Paris it's like every girls fantasy well at least it's mine lol

Only one more I'm afraid ;p Been writing this for over a year now

NOOOOOOO OMGGG JUST ONE MOREE ?

Thank you so much b3stfriend4lif3 <3 I apologise beautiful creature ;p Give me three days xx

Why did you leave it like this?!? Now.. We must wait. They better get together in the end..

Aww wow I am loving this! More, more more!!!

They have a history and a baby together.

He's going to tell Alice off and then he and Jenna are going to get back together because they will see all they care about is Brooklyn and each other.

That would be wonderful. Why do they have to make everything so complicated? ;p

Really wish her and Layton would see past this stupidity and get married and have a little boy❤️

I think she should give Layton more credit. He is trying to change...

I know, I was smiling like a sop all through writing it :') As for Layton and Jenna...I can't give away too much but there's literally about eight chapters left until it's finished so you'll find out soon I promise <3

Wow what a cute chapter! I loved it. But what about Layton and her? :(

I still want her and Layton to be together. They weren't a couple very long before they broke things off. maybe they will be a couple after she has the baby. What if she goes into labor on Christmas?

Thank you lovely <3 Next update in a couple of days

omgg in love with this ! update asap. i wish he would fucking realize how stupid hes being! karma should bite him in the ass

Me too ;p There's still time

I really want her and him to be together..

I really want her and him to be together..