Even the Sun Sets in Paradise - Comments

Aha sorry if I'm being unoriginal. I'm trying my best to do something different but still relatable so hope this isn't too bad ;p Thanks for the advice aswell, I just love having subscribers because it makes me happy knowing people are actually taking the time to read this :) xx

Well, when I read the 16th chapter I sai to myself''Come on, are you kidding me?Another story that has to do with a fifteen-year-old girl having a baby???''.But then, I started readind the other chapters I changed my mind.It's good!!!!!!
And another thing concerning the author''Don't get obsessed with you subscribers!The only thing that you should care about is your story and what people that you appreciate think of your wok!''.
Just an advice!

Fridaysbloom, you are the best. I've been wanting a super long comment like that ever since I've started writing this. Thank you so much. It means the world. Thank you Crazy and Impulsive aswell. Aww, you two have made my day :D I'm going to try and write another chapter now just because you guys are the best ;p

Even though I haven't read the whole story, I wanna say that the way you write is pretty good because you go straight to what you want to say without including unimportant details.

Okay I'm feeling super nice today so I'm going to tell you everything I love about this story. First off it's so well written that is something that is so hard to come across on websites like this. I get giddy when I see you've updated. You've created relatable characters and that is so important to a story. I don't care how good your plot is if I can't relate to your characters it's a shit story. You use proper grammar! Gosh I love you for that. I get butterflies when I read this story because I truly care about what happens to Jenna and she's a fictional character. Please for the love of god kill Maci I want her to get hit by a bus she annoys me so much. I really hope you write a chapter where Jenna finally stands up for herself and says what she really means. Also I hope you don't follow an overly cliche route and have Jenna get kidnapped or something like that. But if you do don't make it a quick fix make us wait, drag it out. Write from Layton's pov and show his angst over her and their baby being missing and his relief when she is found. Just some input and tips haha you don't have to listen to me or anything cuz you know it's your story but yea. I love it and keep up the good work. :)

Me either tbh. I know I created Maci and everything, but I can't stand her ;p

I don't want him and Mack together.

FINALLY!

Thank you for updating, I love this story <3

Haha, he's not very good at hiding it, huh;p Thank you so much, means a lot xx

I knew it was Layton. But this story is brilliant anyway!

Ahh thank you so much. This actually made my day <33

Omg omg omg OMG omg pleaseeeeeeeeeee update again soon I absolutely adore this story

<3

Awwww thankyou very much for the comment :') hehe, you'll have to wait and see though ;) xxx

I think he really likes her. I do<3

My first comment :D Awww thank you so much :D

Excited for the next chapter