Heartkiller - Comments

@ ladychemical
aw, well thank you!

Greatest. Story. Ever. Its so damn unique and beautifully written. Keep updating!!

@ ducky7
Aw, well I'm glad you stuck around! :D
Thanks for all your wonderful comments. You're so sweet<3

I've been reading for a while now without comments, unsure how I would like the story. Honestly, I think it is really good and such a different approach to a "fan-fic". I think you have a very good writing ability and the way you use the flashback to fill in more background details is awesome. I can easily identify with Avery and really like her character - feel like she would be someone I would be friends with I real life. I love the overall tone of the story and am looking forward to reading more about these two. Great job!

@ BuryMeInWhite
aww, I'm sorry :( No, she's not secretly alive or anything like that. I'm not too good with writing the supernatural, so I wouldn't do that. I like that you're getting so into it though!

And that's okay. Aw, I'm glad it's on your list of favorites. :D Thank you for the compliments!

(Also I just realized it's my first comment here and I apologize myself for it because I started to read your fic for a while now and it's one of my favorite, there's not much realistic fanfics in here (actually I just have one another in mind) and that's very refreshing to read, I absolutely love every details of it !)

Aw, that was a little painful to read their plans knowing they're not gonna happen, now you got me all delusional like she's not dead and they're gonna end up growing old with their childs facing the world but UGH ! That's not how the reality of this fic is going and that makes me genuinely SO sad which mean you're really good at writing because I'm probably enjoying reading this too much haha. Can't wait for the next update !

@ will-you-pause GREAT!!! i'm so excited :)

@ katherinewheel working on the next chapter now! Hopefully, it will be out this weekend. :)

i miss your updates :( i love this story so much.

@ ladychemical
:( hold on to your socks... it may be getting even more emotional later.

@ kristi_motionless
aw, I'm glad you think so! Working on the next chapter now :)

*hurts my heart, not hearts my heart.

UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THIS STORY HEARTS MY HEART.

I love this story, you're really good at putting real emotion into it! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

@ katherinewheel Thanks, hahha. Yep, the two don't mix well!

This last chapter was really funny, drunkenness and voice messages aren't the best idea hahaha, I enjoyed reading it as always!

@ ladychemical
omg, you commenters are just on a roll today. Fuck. As much as you think my writing evokes emotion from you, so do your comments from me. I think it's just so amazing that anybody is even interested in my writing at all and for you to say that it's beautiful and that you forget that it's fan fiction... I mean, I don't know what to say. I'm so touched, honestly.

wow, that's like my biggest concern when I write: I want to make sure that it's believable and that the readers can feel what the characters feel. I'm so glad that you think I'm doing that. Thank you for all your positive comments, I really appreciate it.

And I'll keep writing! *salutes*
Is there anything in particular you want to read about? I love to take suggestions! <3

@ cciara19
aww, well thank you! I do appreciate the feedback that I get, so keep 'em coming! hahha

As far as taste goes, I mean, to each their own, I suppose.

wow. Holy shit. "Transcends genres"??? I feel like you give me too much credit, hahha. It warms my heart to read how much you love it though, it really does. You have no idea; you totally made my day when I read your comment.

I hope future chapters live up to your expectations <3
Is there anything in particular you want to see happen? I love to take suggestions!

Oh dear god. This story rips my heart out every time. This is beautifully written - sometimes i forget that its a fan fiction! And such a unique story line and usually not the kind of girl people choose for villes girlfriend in s story. And fuck Ville. Every pain he ''feels'' and every pain you write about is so well written i just feel it when i read it and sometimes i just have to stop because my heart needs a quick break haha! KEEP ON WRITING THIS FUCKING STORY.