Heartkiller - Comments

First and foremost, I have to say that I CANNOT believe this story doesn't have more comments?

It irritates the hell out of me that something as beautiful as your story has no feedback when some of those horribly tacky One Direction stories get a ton of traffic.

PEOPLE. DO. NOT. HAVE. TASTE.

I myself am not exactly partial to HIM but the story you have written here totally TRANSCENDS genres.
In case my point wasn’t clear, I dig it, keep doing what you do.

It’s lovely <3

@ kristi_motionless :(

Ugh poor Ville!!.... Made me cry!!

update coming in the next few days! <3

@ ducky7 thank you for your kind words! :)

All I wanna do after reading this is give that poor boy a hug! Lol. Very interesting storyline. I like your writing style and way you transition. Good job!

@ katherinewheel Thank you! More will be out soon ;)

I can't wait to read more of this, very well done, i love it.

@ ladychemical asdfghjkjl; thank you! >.<

I did NOT want this to end. I could read this for hours without a single break.

@ FallyVengeance.
aww, thank you so much for saying that! :)

This is probably one of the best stories ive read on here in a while.

Well, I'm glad you gave me a thorough explanation! :D

@ BlackFeather..
There will definitely be more present action! Ville actually does some pretty extreme things in response to Avery's death, and I wanted to spell out their relationship pretty well before I get into any of that. I'd say we have a couple chapters of full flashbacks, a brief transition period with both present and flashbacks in one chapter, and then mainly chapters about the present with OCCASIONAL flashbacks. At that point, the flashbacks would be explaining a difficult period of the last year of their relationship, which will then tie back into the first chapter to explain what happened the night of the accident. I hope that makes sense. That's my plan for now; we'll see how things work out. Thanks for asking! :)

I feel like that was a really long answer. The main thing is: yes, there will be more present action! :D

I love the little pieces of insight into their life together. Although I'm wondering, will the whole story be in the form of him recounting past events, or will there also be more present action? Not that I mind either way, but I'm curious.

any comments on the latest chapter?

@ ladychemical Well, reading your comments makes ME super happy! I've been asking for comments on tumblr as well, but I only now realized that I didn't have a link to my ask box posted! Thanks for pointing it out; it's now on there. Feel free to leave comments here and/or on tumblr. As I said, I love hearing feedback from my readers, and I appreciate every single comment. It's very encouraging to see. So thank you!

I saw your story on tumblr and I've loved reading it and now finding it on Mibba just makes me super happy because I can now leave you comments on how much I love this story. And I agree with the last comment, it just keeps getting so interesting.

@ katherinewheel hahha, I'm glad you liked that little moment in the end! Also super happy to know that you find my story so interesting! :) Love the feedback

OMG! really funny, this is getting more and more interesting!