The Science of Monsters - Comments

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA that's awesome. Punched, slapped, chained up. Hmmm hahaha that was just too good. Okay ahaha now I gotta get back to catching up.

I love how Jarvis is kind enough to offer some peace for Scar:) the green house sounds beautiful :)

I love how that giant bunny because that's what everyone women needs

Awee damn it Tony! Stop messing up you moron

Really good chapter and I can't wait to see the next one :)

@ Lokison.
Oh god! I have to re-write that hole part now. I forgot she met Jarvis in the warehouse! It's been so long since her and Jarvis were sarcastic together.

Yay!!!! An update super happy!!!
Yeah Betty shut the hell up, I don't like you just so you know.
Scarlett has forgotten Jarvis? And insults Peppers choice in clothes. Pepper be nice Jesus!
Tony is well...Tony
And that's right Bruce baby you tell Betty off!

Really good chapter babe but next time check through some spelling errors were found this time. Other than that I love it!

Yay!!!! An update super happy!!!
Yeah Betty shut the hell up, I don't like you just so you know.
Scarlett has forgotten Jarvis? And insults Peppers choice in clothes. Pepper be nice Jesus!
Tony is well...Tony
And that's right Bruce baby you tell Betty off!

Really good chapter babe but next time check through some spelling errors were found this time. Other than that I love it!

Okay I was waiting for Tony to get punched and get his snarky remarks at Fury:)

Bruce what's going on?!??

And seriously you're making me wait to know what happens next ? Ahhhhh damn it! Anyways as always you've written an amazing chapter and tugged on my chest and feelings.

Can't wait!!

Ahaha Pirate! I laughed so hard at that one. I'm glad she gets to go "home" because at least then she'll be as close as she can to Bruce. And Hoss! AH I hate that one. My uncle started calling my kid Big Hoss and I was like "listen up yo. Not happening." My son is now called Buckshot at my Uncle's house... Eh anything is better than Hoss right? LOL.

I'm just glad that you updated :3
I missed this story !!!

Thank the high heavens for her finally getting out of Shield dear god, I laughed when Stark made his comment about Fury.

I'm glad Bruce is okay :) though I'm sure he's missing Scar :(

RAWR!!!!!!!!!! I just want to punch Stark in the face. LIKE WHAT THE F DUDE!! But I like Natasha haha =D

PUNCH HIM. SHE SHOULD JUST PUNCH HIM! And they should let her go home... At least she'd be close to Bruce in the best way she knows how. PUNCH TONY. Okay I'm done. =]

BRAVOOO!!!

HOLY CRAP
OH MY Y GOD *screams and grabs tissues*
I hate you so much right now for making me cry :( Such a sad yet heart warming and breaking chapter :(

Starks humour did not even slightly make me laugh it just made me want to cry :(

Love it everything about this chapter love it! Way to go on making the tears go though.

Can't wait for the next chapter :)

AHHHHHHHHH whatever man ='[ I really hate them right now. All of them. Except for poor Scar and Bruce. Really? Shoot him! Gah. She's gonna be so broken!!

Yes!!!! Finally an update to make me cry and have feelings for Scar and Bruce.

Why?!?
Do you do this to me???

Gah I have to wait D:
I'm so excited to read what's going to happen next :)

Starky :)

Gah I finally caught up and OMG NO GOODBYES. NO. NOOOOOO NEVER!!!!!!!! =[ Jeeze I love this story. It is my absolute favorite!

Well looks like this is my lucky day :)
Poor Scarlett :( I feel bad for her as I always did .

Nick Fury >:/ I hate you man I hate you

Awee no Banners goodbye is coming up soon :(

At least the people who harmed her are dead :) now for sir Stark to appear soon ?

Written and described perfect as always love!

Here's your Steve and Wendy babes!!!

Gosh darn it you always have to make me want more don't you? this story man I'm not even kidding just takes my heart wraps it up and re delivers it to me. I want more and yet I know that I'll have to wait this one out like most of your stories...keeping me waiting.

Seriously back with Betty? Hell freaking no! No Bruce you are a green monster who don't need no human lady in his life ;) Seriously though I hate that Shield as always has a way of keeping him inside and forced into some kind of an agreement.

I'm glad he was worried about Scarlet:) and that Widow could not bring herself to hurt her.

Awww we finally get to see TONY!!!! YAY!!!!!

I'm really excited about seeing him again and how he's planning on working on Pepper even though he rather tinker than just fix her :)

Great as always now I'll hide away and drown in my feelings towards everyone in this story D:

You must really love me because being sick + getting some Bruce and Scarlet going made me feel just a tiny bit better :)

As always I enjoyed reading this chapter, you've amazed me once more. The way scarlet is back in her old environment even if it was Shield this time. It has to be pretty scary for her after she had been with Bruce for weeks, being trapped again isn't fair :(

Where is Bruce? Is he okay??? I hope so :(

You've got black widow down pretty good so far and hahaha Robin Hood is a great name for Clint.

I'm sorry this isn't very long of a comment due to being sick but this was seriously great and I can't wait to read the next update :)

Sorry for the delayed comment I can't wait for some action - I feel like you've been building up to drama and fights, and finally the Hulk is coming out, so the next update should be an intense one! The comic at the end was great

I've got two pointers if you'd like.
The first thing is to have as little as possible dialogue/scenes basically copied from the movies, because most (if not all) of the readers have already seen it and it gets a bit boring to read. (I got this tip myself ages ago and I've found it to be helpful)
And second, there were parts in the second chapter where you've got Scarlett, Bruce and Coulson all talking, but sometimes you went for a while without saying who said what, so it could kinda be anyone. I mean, this could just be a personal thing, maybe others follow it fine, but I sorta stumbled over that part.

Gosh Darn it Coulson! Why you gotta be such a jerk?!
*glares at him*

As always I've once more enjoyed reading this story and you always find ways to get me on the edge wanting more from all the characters :D

I like that you break away from the drama in the chapters to show that these characters have a funny side to them. Even if it's just for a line or a few lines, I like seeing them being a bit goofy.

Scarlet is seriously growing on me, I love when she appears to be this really amazing character. Can't blame her though for being great because you made her that way :)

OHH! You mentioned Betty! Freaking sweet and I think someone a bit jealous without knowing it ;)

And Grrr Coulson you are not cool!

Anyways babes I loved this chapter as always and enjoy the story :)

So excited for the next :D

Awe I'm glad you find us the readers part of your story :) makes you a great author:3

I loved Scarlette being bosy and of course food is great after long nap:)
Bruce being helpful as possible :)

I'm sorry that this Isn't a long comment! I kinda just woke up:)

I love this story and the chapters are always amazing :3

Awe yes! Tony and Harely!

Sorry for the late chapter - I had no internet, then there was NaNo, so I've only just gotten around to this
Anyway, Jarvis just kicked ass and was hilarious, I loved it. I'd also like to say (I don't know if I've already mentioned this before or not) that I think it's great you include details about car parts. Not like I know anything about cars, but it makes it seem more realistic.
"... tapping impatiently a love him…" - I think that sentence needs some adjusting.
I was a bit worried when he was going green, but was glad to see he didn't Hulk up. This was a good chapter