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  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Awww!!!
    Kiss from Brian and roses from Matt. :)
    I just don't know how they will find out all three know eachother... It's gonna be interresting to watch it all play out!
    Can't wait for more!!!
    September 11th, 2013 at 04:14am
  • brady07

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    Aww I love it! Keep them coming! Mr. Green
    September 11th, 2013 at 03:28am
  • BehindGreenEyes

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    Awww. Matt is super sweet. So is Brian! Amos seems like a wonerful person. Great update!
    September 11th, 2013 at 03:18am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Great updates :D
    haha I can just imagine the look on Jenny's face when she saw Amos walk out with sexy Brian by her side.
    Ugh I don't like Mark at all..who does he think is putting Amos down like that.
    I can't wait for the next update :D
    September 11th, 2013 at 02:18am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I love it :)
    When I read this chapter it just reminded me of the movie this means war, how the guys were seeing the same women and she didn't know they were friends haha
    Update soon
    September 11th, 2013 at 01:50am
  • HeatherLH9007

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    Love this! I always look forward to the updates! I also love the story line. It's new and fresh. Great work!
    September 11th, 2013 at 12:33am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Well.. I got that email update late. Lol.
    Can't wait to see what happens next!!
    September 10th, 2013 at 10:12pm
  • helena_88

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    hahah she just up and left?? poor mattie! Mr. Green aaweh so bri came to the office and got a first glance at the douchebag.. and lunch.. yeah lovin' this already!
    September 10th, 2013 at 09:52pm
  • AJ9

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    I'm loving this and really excited to see where you're going to take it Mr. Green. Please update soon xx
    September 10th, 2013 at 09:00pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    HOLY SHIT!!
    It's about to get steamy up in here! xD
    Please update soon!!
    September 10th, 2013 at 08:59pm
  • emeraldrose187

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    I love this story. I can't wait to see how Brian is going to fit in here.
    September 10th, 2013 at 07:23pm
  • synystarr

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    I'm liking this story a lot. Can't wait for the next update :)
    September 10th, 2013 at 02:50pm
  • BehindGreenEyes

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    Omg this story is awesome!
    September 10th, 2013 at 02:37pm
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    Haha Amos' dad is awesome!!! And I'm looking forward to seeing Brian come in!! Can't wait for more :)
    September 10th, 2013 at 01:31pm
  • daddysgirlyo

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    you never disappoint im really excited for a new update
    September 10th, 2013 at 12:59pm
  • helena_88

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    hahaha love amos dad in that chapter!! so funny how he made matt totally nervous Mr. Green
    and damn isn't he just soo cute!! and not telling the whole story about avenged- not so weird though since it's their first date kind of thing.. ooh will brian come home on their morning after?? walk of shame?? Wink
    how he will fit?? well I think that maybe at first when he sees her he'll be a little off or whatever and then getting to know her maybe even falling for her?? Mr. Green ah I dunno just sounds like something like that can happen when you read the summary Wink
    September 10th, 2013 at 10:14am
  • eli666_

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    YES MATT, TAKE HER TO BED!!!!
    September 10th, 2013 at 09:41am
  • brady07

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    Oh god! I need more!
    September 10th, 2013 at 08:35am
  • synluvr

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    I really like this new story ...please update soon can't wait to read more.. ::wink2
    September 10th, 2013 at 08:11am
  • synluvr

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    I really like this new story ...please update soon can't wait to read more.. Wink
    September 10th, 2013 at 08:09am
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