Betrayed - Comments, page 11

AJ9 (100)

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Please update soon, I can't wait to read more of this! Xx

September 10th, 2013 at 08:00am

CrazyPebbles21 (100)

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I love it
I do, I do want know how Bain fits in the story line haha
Update soon
Great chapter :D

September 10th, 2013 at 07:48am

stacasaurus (100)

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Loving it!

September 10th, 2013 at 07:16am

JustShrugAtlas (100)

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I'm nervous to see how Brian fits in. And how does she not know of Avenged Sevenfold?!?!?! Weirdo. I'm just excited to see how the whole story goes and what kind of character Amos is going to be. Pleasssssssse update soon! 23 days until I see Avenged Sevenfold!!!!! Miahahahahaha

September 10th, 2013 at 05:44am

lanalawlett (100)

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Why'd you stooooppppp thereeeeee?!

September 10th, 2013 at 05:36am

HerNameIsAlice (100)

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@ FreakyDarling85
Ohh, ok. Thanks!

September 10th, 2013 at 05:35am

pogo5176 (100)

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loving this...can't wait to read more

September 10th, 2013 at 05:16am

FreakyDarling85 (100)

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@ HerNameIsAlice
In a nutshell, it basically means that real men prefer curvy, voluptuous women over thin, twiggy ones.

September 10th, 2013 at 05:12am

HerNameIsAlice (100)

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I don't want to seem stupid but what does 'bones are for the dog, meat is for the man' mean? I've never heard that before.

September 10th, 2013 at 05:07am

Harley91594 (100)

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Oh my gosh, I wanna meet a sexy rock star man in a grocery store too! You should be my fairy godmother.
Anyway, this is off to a good start and I'm curious to see where it's going, and how Brian is going to join in on the story.

September 10th, 2013 at 04:24am

FunkyKat (100)

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It's really good! You absolutly must continue it, I'm already hooked! XD

September 10th, 2013 at 04:14am

sagen (100)

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Please keep going, I love it already!!!!

September 10th, 2013 at 03:24am

AvengedFanfoREVer (100)

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Amazing start!!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Update soon please!!

September 10th, 2013 at 03:21am

brady07 (100)

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Love this story! Please continue!

September 10th, 2013 at 02:56am

emeraldrose187 (100)

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Absolutely. I love it already.

September 10th, 2013 at 02:35am

readaholic (100)

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I love the start! I am looking forward to more. Update soon!

September 10th, 2013 at 01:06am

fiction246 (100)

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Definitely worth pursuing!!! I love it!!! Mark is an asshole but I can't wait to see where this goes. And your disclaimer cracked me up "If I did, I'd be busy braiding Matt's gorgeous hair right now." HAHA looking forward to more :)

September 10th, 2013 at 12:34am