Walking Disaster - Comments

Ahhh this is so good!

This was a great chapter much like the previous poster I love a vulnerable Tommy, but I also like a possessive one as well. Also the idea of him in a tux at a charity event with Lena is adorable. I like the intrigue you have built around her father. Looking forward to seeing him soon.

I love vulnerable Tommy.:D

Love it, first fight but they worked it out, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

This story is AMAZING! Your such a lovely writer. Very detailed. I can't wait to read more! <3

love love love

Time to tell Tommy he is goin to a ball next month Merk just sayin anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

This was such a great chapter. Tommy is growing as a person courtesy of his relationship with Lena. Sweet and awkward scene with their goodnight kiss is just how I like them. Keep up the great work.

Going*

Going*

Patrick's gluing to be there anyway, isn't he? Damn.

Oh my gosh! The poor baby... :(

Hii! So Lena is a lot like me and she's based off you so that means you're like me which means we're friends now. That's just how it works.
So its been a lil bit, I had to catch up but omg they kissed!! And then he was all AWOL but for good reason. I didn't think he was cheating (is it really cheating though if you're not even really together? Questions that need to be answered) because he chased her for so long and obviously likes her a hell of a lot, just wouldn't make sense that when he's finally got her. He goes and cheats.
Then again, this is a boy we're talking about and I will never understand their logic or thinking.
My favorite was prolly when Merk called him drunk at the party (classic me move honestly). I also love that he did what he said he was gonna do and punched every face that got in his way. A man after my own heart.
Okie I just wrote a novel of a review, hope you update soon!!
And fuck cancer!

Awww I kno Lena feels like an ass but the least he could have done was call her and tell him he went home becuz of his dad but instead he ignored her a week and thn came to her rescue when she called him up while being intoxicated at a party with men lurking around, smh I swear boys r afraid to show their feelings, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Tommy needs to suck up that tough guy persona.

I feel guilty right now for thinking he was pelvis slapping

I'm loving this story it's so cute, I like Tommy he is a handsome devil ;) anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Wonderful chapter. Way to tease us. Their first kiss was amazing and well written. Keep up the amazing work.

She's going to get hurt but at least she is happy now.

Its about time...