To Wed a Princess - Comments

I can't wait to see how this dinner goes. As for your A/N, I think you should possibly make a sequel out of it. That would be pretty awesome, but that's also coming from a ZV girl, lol.

I would make it a sequel :) can't wait to see how family dinner goes atleast the queen herself decided to give him a chance :)

this is one of my favorite stories. I like this chapter and get so pumped when I see it's been updated!

You should most definitely make it a sequel :)Loved the update can't wait for the next one.

Ah!!! I wonder how dinner is going to go?

Harry likes Brian
Grandma wants to meet him
Atleast breakfast wasn't a complete bust
Brian is going to lay the charm on and Eloise's family is going to love him because he won't give them any other option

I can totally see Brian drinking tea and eating biscuit with her Majesty... XD

Oh my God, I can't wait to see how that meeting goes, Brian in the same room as the Queen of England? This is gonna be great!

I can't wait to see how everyone else reacts to their 'relationship'. I feel that Brian taking that picture was a low blow, but a smart move at the same time. Please update this soon!

We're getting into the nitty gritty of their relationship/arrangement! Brian's got to have some other motive for the photo, I just feel it.

That was absolutely a dick move, even though I kind of understand why he wanted "insurance" from her. I can't wait to see what her family's reaction is.

Yay, back to regular updates!!! LOL. Curious for the reaction of the family. I think Harry will be cool with it.

I can't believe Brian went to such an extreme just to have leverage. It seems like some days they're good, then he has to go and ask or say something stupid and she backs off. Can't wait to see what the rest of her family has to say about the "love" between these two.

Damn, despite seeing Brian's side in distrusting her, that wasn't fair. I've been dying for this update and despite it's shortness, I'm so glad it finally came. I was going crazy waiting! I wish I could hug Eloise. Poor girl's going through so much right now.

Brian is a fuc**** asshole for asking such thing... and he could have at least try to comfort her after... What a dic*.

Brian is an asshole for doing that to Eloise
He could have found a different way
I don't believe it was for anything other than trust; for both of them
For Brian to know he has leverage over Eloise if he wanted it
It was also so that Brian could prove to Eloise he won't use the picture

Hey I loved this so much and loved that bit with Brian and him taking the picture of her leg. She better be careful because that could get out of hand please update soon xxxxx

So I officially do not like Charlotte. But I loved the update, keep them coming. :DDD

So I totally read this days ago and thought I commented? Maybe I was just dreaming that... anyway, I'm lame.

Charlotte is so... juvenile. Ick. Eloise needs to cut all ties with her (but maybe there will be more drama there...?) And Eloise is handling her situation surprisingly well, but I guess it's because she's still in shock over everything. I wouldn't be surprised if she has a meltdown later that possibly puts a dent in Syn's plans? Or hers? I'm theorizing too much :)

Looking forward to the next update!

Wohhooooo extra long chapter!
Awww I always love Brian/Eloise interactions! “You've realised you're gonna be married to such a sexy man and can't quite contain all of your emotions and excitement?” And, in the end, he nails it! He has studied her enough to understand what’s getting to her! That or he just understands that what happened to her would upset her as much as any other woman… Either way, I like that he understood!
It’s sad that she can’t sleep without having nightmares… Not unexpected though and perhaps, she needs some kind of therapy...
Charlotte is so mindless... Seriously, choosing the capital of shark attack... tsk!
False b*tch! Just arrives and acts all sorry for El...
Anyway, she chose South Africa so Eloise would be scared and Brian would be the knight in shining armour... Does she know Eloise at all??
Unfortunately, it worked a little differently than what Charlotte had in mind... stupid, stupid...
And her reasoning for why Brian is better than Cardona...
I wished El had told her who Brian was! Even though, I know that wouldn’t be realistic! Just to see her pale and pathetic...
“Oh, Brian does more than look at me,” This made me feel good! Even being a lie, it made me feel great that Charlotte believed it and surely felt jealous!
And then William had to go discuss her relationship... And make her realise that the lie will be a full one... To everyone, especially those she loves... And she lets the whole stress of the situation come to the surface and behaves as a human being again...
Really enjoyed the chapter! Looking forward for the next one!