Sweet Like Sugar - Comments

Yay, I'm so glad you updated this! This chapter was really great. Ugh I love Sugar and Finn so much!

Each time I read this I remember how much I love the characters and its FLIPPING AWESOME!!!!!! Great job! :)

bahahaha I still love these two so much!
:)

Have officially fallen in love with Albie and Finn. Update soon :) please

ohmygoodness can Sugar get anymore awkward? lol I've been thinking about this story. So glad to see an update. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Haha I kinda love his family ^_^
AND IT IS SO A DATE!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter :)

YAAAAY! Omg, Sugar is so cute, poor guy I'd be mortified. THANKS FOR THE UPDATE!!! I missed this little gem. :)

Eek! You have to update soon!

Yeah, so I read this because of your comment on my blog about a week ago I have to say that I REALLY love this story. I ship Albie and Finn so hard, and I really really want them to end up together xD

On a more serious note, you write the whole thing so well. The way you describe Finn's emotions is very realistic, and it's interesting reading about Finn's confusion over his sexuality. There were some spelling errors in there, but they could easily be corrected!

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Holy crap. My friend recommended this to me earlier this week and I just LOVE it! It's just so dang interesting and your characterization is well thought out. :)

Holy crap. My friend recommended this to me earlier this week and I just LOVE it! It's just so dang interesting and your characterization is well thought out. :)

So far I've only read the first chapter, but I'm liking it. Sugar's narration is really enjoyable, and I like how you've portrayed living in a small town. The only thing I can think you could improve on is using a few more commas to help the flow, but other than that, it's a great start. I'll be checking out the other chapters.

Haha, I immediately love the layout; simple with just a hint of humor in it---I don't know if it was intentional, but the banner made me smile for some reason.

Oh, just a minor, minor note; the chapter title for Chapter 3: "a dirty gay theif" ~spelling error of thief.

Anyways, onto the chapter!!
I just love the tone the narrator(Sugar) has about his town. The way he tells the story from his thoughts is great because you really get a sense of his personality and his humor.
Haha, I love his somewhat blunt attitude he has in the dialogue with his sister. That was great!

And the kiss scene...
The way and what he was thinking through the situation was hilarious. And the somewhat panicked way of thinking and overthinking---it was both funny and realistic.

Haha, this is a fantastic read! I am definitely subbing and reccing!

This was really fun to read. Sugar is hilarious, and I also really empathize with him, which makes me like his character even more. There's some grammar errors, but not anything that couldn't be easily fixed. Sub'd :)

As soon as I started reading this story I was smiling, I love it, it's charming but has this serious note to it. I did notice just a small error on since my before my parents were teenagers. Should take out the first my and then She hits my arms but laughs. It's not really a mistake but I think I'd make better sense to say arm but other then that the first chapter is great!

Just finished reading it now, overall this is a really cool, unique story. I really love it! Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more :)

Ohhhhh I just want to give Sugar a big ol' hug! :(
Poor boy :(
Can't believe Mark was such an ass but I'm glad Peeps stuck by him :)
Lol at drunk Finn ^_^

I'm pretty sure this is the most adorable thing in the ENTIRE world and my favourite story in a looong time You are amazing.

I loved this =] It's so witty and funny and easy to relate to. You're such a good writer I can't wait to read more of your stuff!

Words can't even express how good this story is.

THIS LOOKS REALLY AMAZING AND ADORBS

plus i feel like i can relate u feel

SO IM GOING TO START READING ONCE NANOWRIMO IS OVER OK