The Poison in Your Blood - Comments

What a jerk. I was all happy when blair was standing up to him. It was almost like she was having some kind of break through or something. And I liked the mental image her holding austin's hand and him calming her. That was nice.

I really cant wait for the wedding. :)

More soon?

@ bratzgirl
probably not right now. i'm going to do the second part to this one now. but we'll see after i finish the sequel

Loved the ending are you going to do a JRM one now ????

Good ending. I was proud of Blair and Lana for standing up to Brad. He was a creep. Cant wait to see what the sequel brings! Hopefully it starts soon. ;)

Please update soon can't wait to see how this ends

This one started out so fun and happy. Then it got so depressing. Lol. As a whole the chapter was great. But I feel so bad for Blair. Poor thing.

But i really loved when you were describing Madison and Doug's relationship. That really hit home for me right now.

Great job babe. More soon? Can't believe this one is almost over.

I loved the beginning with the party, it was fun. I missed the kids and their friends. Its such a fun part of this story.

The part with Blair made me so sad though. The whole thing is just so sad.

Great chapter though, its about time you updated this one! More soon!

Best part of this was the fat chick story. Lana was having way too much fun with that. Lol. Austin was hilarious. These last couple of chapters have been a nice refreshing break to this story. From all the murder and mayhem. Lol. God chapter, babe. I will read lawless tomorrow sometime.

I loved this one too. Haha. It was so on point when Austin told Lana she was getting too excited about the idea of a threesome with a fat chick. I laughed at that part. I'm excited for them to be home and back to their normal life. This Vegas chunk has been lots of fun though. More soon!

Cute chapter. Just light and fun with them doing normal things. Lol. I liked when they were shopping. Shopping is the best. Lol.

Cute. More soon?

Love love love it !!!!!!!

Ok, that last comment my sister made.. lmao

This was super sweet. I can tell you drew a lot of inspiration from your Vegas trip. Lol. You always take stuff from your life and put it in your stories, its so fun. Update soon! Seriously!

The part where you're like, no teenagers, no cats killing bunnies. That made me laugh. Then she started telling that story and I felt sad, then you lightened it all up by bringing up peanut m&ms, and I love those little fuckers.

And they're married now! Yayyyyyyyy! Lol. Finally.

Haha. More soon?

This chspter wasnt what I thought it was going to be, but it was good. It was good to learn something about Lana's past. She has really been through a lot yet she always thinks of herself as normal and boring.

More soon!

Reading the tattoo scene made me want to get another one lol

I love butterflies. They're kind of my thing. So I loved the tattoo part. And they're gonna get married. Yayyyy. A happy little vampire family. Lol

And doug is a saint for doing 3 huge tattoos in one sitting. That's a lot. And I liked the little conversation about Madison. Cute.

Sweet little chapter, babe. More soon?

Still loving it hope you'll post more soon ?

Ok, I have to swoon over Doug real quick. Ah, he's so perfect. Idk how you came up with the most perfect male counterpart for my character, but I'm so glad you did.

And yay, tbey're getting married earlier! I have a friend who did that, courthouse and then they went to hawaii to have a big wedding. So romantic.

I just loved this one. Update soon!

Still loving it hope you'll post more soon ?

I knew exactly where the bunny thing came from. Poor bunny. Lol

I agree with Morgan though, Austin is maddening sometimes because he just thinks he can get away with everything by hynotizing her or something and all will be well. Oh well, at least they're back to being happy again. Now I want chicken parm, that is one of my favorite meals. Yum!

Update soon!