This was a good chapter. It gave some depth to the Josh character, which was nice. I'm glad Lana and Austin are back together and happy. I'm excited for yhem to get married. :)
I thought this chapter was very redeeming for Jon. He came through for her and wasnt a jerk about it. You can see how much he cares for her. I thought it was nice.
And yay, Austin came! Now hopefully everything will be great again and they can get married!
I actually liked it. I would have liked to have seen some big emotional conversation with Lana and Jonathan, but it worked well without it. It shows that even though they broke things off they are still friends or at least still care about each other. Or him for her anyway.
And Yay he finally came! Now she just has to take him back and all will be swell. Lol. Until Anna's bf finds out that he'sa vampire. Lol. That will be the next thing.
You used my midol line! Woohoo! He d does need to take a pill, the big jerk. Everything she said was true. He's always blaming someone else for his problems and shit that he does. It's not her fault. And if he didn't want anyone to know he wouldn't act likea vampire in front of them. Obviously.
Good job on this one babe. More soon?
I'm sure he'll probably hypnotize her and get her back or something. Lol
Awww, this one was so sad and emotional. Austin is such a jerk! He better come back next chapter and apologize and make up for everything big time. I feel so bad for Jackie. :(
Austin needs to get a grip. He's always mad at the wrong person. When he was threatening Madison in the parking lot I was kind of pissed at Lana. Like, how dare she just let that go on? He was acting like it was Madison's fault he was a vampire or something. Then he got up in Lana's shit. He needs to take a chill pill for that pms.
I liked the whole conversation between Madison and Lana, thought. That really brought some good depth to the chapter. And it really showed more of their friendship, and how close they are.
Ok, Austin is acting like a prick. Its not Lana's fault so he needs to chill the fuck out. Also, the conversation between Lana and Madison was good. Its about time she know her best friend is engaged to a vampire. Lol. More soon.
The vampire hit man thing cracked me up. LOL. The thought of that is hilarious. And the way you kept calling that guy "Creepy guy" through the whole little bit there was great too. I liked the end when Austin just came out with being a vampire. Madison's reaction should be good. LOL. But yeah, it's about time that she knows.
Good chapter. Fun and creepy. A win win with this story. Haha.
Well this was fun until the creeper showed up. Lol. I can honestly say I have no idea what my reaction would be to someone telling me they're a vampire. Probably disbelief and flat out telling them they're crazy. Lol. More soon!
Well this was fun until the creeper showed up. Lol. I can honestly say I have no idea what my reaction would be to someone telling me they're a vampire. Probably disbelief and flat out telling them they're crazy. Lol. More soon!
This is probably my favorite of all the little fillers you've done recently. A concert is always fun. And I love when you write Madison, because it's so so accurate to her in real life. And is just fun to read her from someone else's point of view. Lol. I'm fan-girling over my sister now.
I really liked this one, probably dont have to say why... ;) Seriously, I like when this one is just fun and sexy and not gruesome and scary. Lol. Keep it up! More soon! Also, is Doug based off anyone in particular, or did you just make him up?
I really liked this one, probably dont have to say why... ;) Seriously, I like when this one is just fun and sexy and not gruesome and scary. Lol. Keep it up! More soon! Also, is Doug based off anyone in particular, or did you just make him up?
I loved this one. It was a fun break from all the murder and mayhem. Lol. I loved flirting with the tattoo guy. It was cute. And omg, I was dying when Austin was doing his protective parent thing with Josh. So funny. More soon!
I agree with Morgan about the conversation they had about turning her, it was mature, not just them arguing. And yay, they're engaged!! How fun. It was a sweet chspter, everything a valentines day chapter should be. More soon!
Aww, cute chapter. They're engaged! Yayyy! Lol. What a sweet little date.
I liked the beginning where they were talking about turning her. It gave the chapter a little more depth, and not just fluff. But I liked the fluff too. :)
This one made my tummy hurt... Well, it might have already been hurting. But yeah. I shuddered a bit. Very gory
But yeah, I don't know if she should be turned. That might get complicated. Especially for Anna. But idk too much about vampires so I don't know all the details. But it seems complicated.