The Things That Matter Most - Comments

Love this story! Can't wait to see what happens next! Brian is such a hot dad!

Damn that was hot!! I'm speechless, seriously!! I love the play dates and Audrey seemed to fit in well with them :) aww I hope Jake gets his wish!! We will just have to wait and see :) can't wait for more!!!!

Always love your stories. Just the right combo of lovey & steamy. Hope Jakey gets his wish. Keep it up!

Aww the ending teared me up a bit. Super sweet. It would be nice for them to have a kid. That's pretty common thing to happen.

That was crazy hot!!!

@ heretic. @ fiction246 @ HanerJoy @ Rick Grimes; @ powerofkisses

Sorry it's been so long since the last update! I'm posting a chapter now and I hope it doesn't disappoint! Thanks for all of the support and feedback!

More play dates = happy Rach.

Jake is finally a part of the family, I'm so happy for them all!

I love Jimmy.

So, Mr Haner, do you regularly ravish your wife on the kitchen table? hahaha, not that I'm complaining at all!

Brian had better be making it up to her later, too! XD

Yay Jake is finally theirs!!!!!!!! And lol McKenna was hilarious!!! $100 to baby sit? I would have taken $50 lol can't wait for more :)

Ohhh yes I am excuted for that play date ::naughy: I am so happy Jake is officially adopted!!!!!! **squealing** and well McKenna is smart xD

Awww! I am so glad Jake is theirs! This was an amazing update, I hope to see more soon! C:

AWWW I'm so happy for them!

@ fantasygirltexas @ AJ9 @ HanerJoy @ powerofkisses @ vengeance35 @ fiction246 @ QueenofBatCountry @ heretic.

Thanks so much for all of the wonderful comments!! I'm glad that you all are still enjoying the story!

We'll see how the adoption goes in the chapter that I'm about to post. I will say that I have plans to bring Jake's abuser(s) into the story but I haven't figured out how or when.

I'm glad you like how cute their little family is, they may be adding to it in the future I definitely try to throw the sexytime in as much as I can, and YES RACH! THEY WILL HAVE MORE PLAYDATES! LOL In fact, one may be coming up in the near future

Thanks again for all of the wonderful feedback! Posting the next chapter now!

PLEASE LET THEM HAVE MORE PLAY DATES!?
*breathes heavily*



N'awww, they're all set t become a proper family they're so adorable. I love how comfortable and at ease Jake is now with them both. Maybe there's more kids in their future, too?

But first, more play dates, please and thank you.

I love this. jake is just so cute and his love for Brian and Mia is slowly bringing him out of his shell cant wait to read more!

I love this. jake is just so cute and his love for Brian and Mia is slowly bringing him out of his shell cant wait to read more!

I wonder if somehow they will be able to have another baby?!? I really like this story :) I love how much they love jake and each other!!! Can't wait for more!!!

This is such a cute story! I hope to see you update again soon!

AWWW that's really cute!

awwwwww officially adopted :D I hope everything goes well, but I have a feeling something not so good will happen.

I can't believe that I didn't comment on the last chapter! Sorry!!

I loved this so much and I really hope that the adoption hearing goes without a hitch. Fingers crossed ....

I really love how you manage to get a bit of smexytime into each chapter. Mia and Brian are such a cute couple. I hope the do go on to have more kids together.

Are you going to bring Jake's abusers into the story? I think it would be good to have them 'encounter' the guys, if you get my meaning. Muhahaha ....

Please update again soon. Xxx :-)