Make Me Feel Alive - Comments

yeah hook, tell emma to mind her own business
aawe.. i feel so sorry for amira.. kinda wanna give her a hug sometimes..

uh my fav. disney princess? I like Mulan because of her awesomeness- taking her dads place and all that..
Merida- fighting her parents on getting married.. well not the turning her mom into a bear thing.. but yea..

jasmine and pocahontas are up there too..

and then there are those that you kinda when you think about it makes you a little annoyed

like: sleeping beauty- she kinda just sleeps through the movie.. hahah
cinderella marries a dude she danced with and because he found her shoe.....
snow white saw the prince once and then gave her a true loves kiss to wake her and wow let's get married..

i adore Rapunzel- she's so cute! and then there's like a gazillion more princesses.......

Oh Amira :(
My heart breaks for her!!

And my favourite princess is either Mulan or Pocahontas. I could never choose ^_^

I feel like Bae is protective in a more than friend kind of way.. Am I wrong to be feeling this way? I sense jealousy. Emma... It's officially on my "to do" list to elbow her in the nose.. Woman needs to back up. She doesn't need to know everything about Killian's life. Or be in it.. But that's just me. (;
Peter seems so in love. It almost breaks my heart that Amira will never love him the way he loves her. Almost. I'm so excited about how everything is flowing.
On a side note: I personally feel like Emma overly states that Henry is her son. We know he is, but at the end of the day, she still gave him up. >.<But that's just me.

loved it! can't wait for more!

bae.... dunno if i should be annoyed or not that he keep trying to tell amira what to do..

emma.. she's kinda bitchy.. and shouldn't get jealous and shit when she one minute wants neil and the next she isn't sure..

killian the squid..

ooh he saw the hickey!! and called amira pans whore. oops! damn emma for ruining things
ugh i just want him to tell amira why he left

Love!

Bae. ♥
Hmm and Killian getting all mad makes me riled up. I can't wait to read more drama. Hehehehe. :)

Update, please?! I'm in need of some hook! Also, very well written, as always.

hahah just me that thinks that they really made ariel stupid in OUAT?? and I really didn't like prince erik for some reason
aaawe! REUNION!! bahahaha love how she pissed off emma! she totally deserve it, just because she's the saviour- she's not that special
hook.. gah! i need to know what pan said or did all those years ago to make him leave without amira..
it was kinda obvious that he still feels strongly for her..

bae.. i like him.. he at least gets it

and snow white! so funny that amira thought she was a man... pmsl!

Well that was an interesting reunion lol
I wonder how she's going to help them without putting herself in danger!
:)

looooooving how bad ass amira is. and i'm dying to see how this progresses.

Just the sad look on Killian's face would be enough satisfaction for me....and maybe mentioning "doing the nasty" with Pan, that would set him off and me a happy, vengeful chick. Props to Amira for being so feisty

That was hilarious.
Emma can just suck it.
I love how Amira denied him, but I would have died laughing at Emma's reaction.
So good.

Rejected Killian.
And cue butthurt Emma.

My God, this has been so entertaining to read. I love how fiesty Amira got. Haha.

I loved the update!

I am currently working on my own Killian story and I would love it if you checked it out when I publish it. :)

Oooo love it can't wait till the next one

Perfect. <3 I can't wait until her and Killian see each other.

Oooh. Killian is probably going to be smacked.
I would smack him, possibly yell at him.

Pan never ceases to amaze me.
I just love his charm, and just everything about him.
Ah~. I am excited to read more. c:

oh man she just had to see him for the first time after 28 years when he kisses Emma.. darn hahah..
hmm i think i'd shoot the arrow so that it landed just by his feet, that'd probably make him pee his pants..
peter.. the little bastard he's so frickin' clever though

naah i think it was good that she didn't go down there to face him at that moment.. now she knows why peter wants henry AND maybe she'll have time to cool down just a little bit before seeing killian up close the next time

Oh, sleeping with Pan? OOH.

I can't get over that. Hahaha.

I have a feeling that seeing Killian will set her on edge, and Peter is just going to try to ruin everything for them. Ah. Omg. So much I can think of.

SOOO excited for this.

Love, love your story!!!!