Make Me Feel Alive - Comments

Freaky in the sheets with Pan!?! My lawd. Just the thought of that is disturbing....although I REALLY want Amira to moan out "Killian" during that ordeal hahah!

Can't wait for moreeee =)

i would love for him to fall off a cliff and not be able to fly honestly- but it wouldn't be neverland without the little bastard..
oh my, she's having sex with pan.. gettin' down and dirty with the enemy well I guess there's no-one else around for her.. and she does think of killian most of the time..
i wonder if pan knows that.. moaahahah..!!

aawe bae!! hahaha must've been so weird to see him all grown up and she hasn't aged one bit

hahahha can't wait for the reunion with hook, that gotta be a kicker since pan can taunt him with a looooot of things when it comes to amira

great start!!

ahhhhhh so happy the first chapter is up!
And I loved Bae and Amira's reunion :)

Absolutely loved! I personally love Pan, this story and in OUAT. There are so many details about him that you discover every so often, plus he's a cutie. (: Excited for the next chapter. (: I really hope she backhands hook when he enters the story...

Loved it!

Post soon, pleaaaaaaseee.

Post soon, pleaaaaaaseee.

So excited for this sequel! I was completely shocked with the ending to I Hope You Suffer.

Excited!

ahhhhh the sequel!!!
SO excited for this :)

Please update. Your writing is amazing, and this story has me hooked. (;

See what I did there? Haha.