Make Me Feel Alive - Comments, page 3

NYC.ShelbyMarie (100)

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Freaky in the sheets with Pan!?! My lawd. Just the thought of that is disturbing....although I REALLY want Amira to moan out "Killian" during that ordeal hahah!

Can't wait for moreeee =)

January 29th, 2014 at 12:36pm

helena_88 (100)

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i would love for him to fall off a cliff and not be able to fly honestly- but it wouldn't be neverland without the little bastard..

oh my, she's having sex with pan.. gettin' down and dirty with the enemy

well I guess there's no-one else around for her.. and she does think of killian most of the time..
i wonder if pan knows that.. moaahahah..!!

aawe bae!! hahaha must've been so weird to see him all grown up and she hasn't aged one bit

hahahha can't wait for the reunion with hook, that gotta be a kicker since pan can taunt him with a looooot of things when it comes to amira

great start!!

January 29th, 2014 at 10:24am

No Tomorrow (100)

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ahhhhhh so happy the first chapter is up!
And I loved Bae and Amira's reunion :)

January 29th, 2014 at 09:46am

Ellie-phant (100)

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Absolutely loved! I personally love Pan, this story and in OUAT. There are so many details about him that you discover every so often, plus he's a cutie. (: Excited for the next chapter. (: I really hope she backhands hook when he enters the story...

January 29th, 2014 at 05:06am