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  • A. J.

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    @ Don'tFearTheReaper
    Hey, no problem. I probably forgot that he was like that. lol
    Gross to me means very disgusting or repulsive. If I were you, I'd look up synonyms for strange or odd or even weird. I dunno. However, I do love this story. Keep up the great work! =)
    April 21st, 2015 at 03:36am
  • Don'tFearTheReaper

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    @ A. J.
    Colton has the monologue of sex being weird, that's why he doesn't masturbate. I know that didn't come across, with the way I wrote it, but Colton is always going to think it's strange, even if he's participating. I couldn't write it the way I knew Colton would have described it, so if you could help, you'll be my best friend forever. Thank you for that critique, and your continued support of my madness. <3
    April 21st, 2015 at 12:12am
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    You leave it there!?? OMG I really want to know what Blaze was up to.
    The sex was really hot, but I'm having trouble with this line when Colton was jacking Blaze off : It was awkward and gross"
    I guess I don't understand why it would be gross to him? He's gay and Blaze is his boyfriend. It took me out of the scene. *shrug*
    April 21st, 2015 at 12:02am
  • Don'tFearTheReaper

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    @ FearTheMotionless
    I just feel bad because aside from the extra plot, everything about Blaze, every feel I overload, it was in the plans since before this story was even an idea. I'm such a bad author-parent.
    April 8th, 2015 at 05:26am
  • FearTheMotionless

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    @ Don'tFearTheReaper
    I think you're doing great with him!
    So many unsolved mysteries, slowing being revealed bit by bit. I love it!
    April 8th, 2015 at 04:51am
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    @ FearTheMotionless
    That cup tho. It's supposed to make you laugh.
    As for Blaze, I literally don't even know anymore.
    April 8th, 2015 at 04:21am
  • FearTheMotionless

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    *flicks off Grandma Hauschild before melting into a puddle of feels*
    (Also, I saw the cup and laughed harder than I should)
    Love the update, dear. <3
    April 8th, 2015 at 03:57am
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    *flicks off Grandma Hauschild before melting into a puddle of feels*
    (Also, I saw the cup and laughed harder than I should)
    Love the update, dear. <3
    April 8th, 2015 at 03:56am
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    April 6th, 2015 at 11:08pm
  • A. J.

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    Great chapter! These two just keep getting more adorable.
    April 6th, 2015 at 11:07pm
  • Don'tFearTheReaper

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    @ vinuushka
    I was just thinking that same thing. I'm beating him up. But the weird thing is that this is the original idea; that all these things happened to Blaze. What does that say about me? Do I hate Blaze? No, I love that man so much, so I don't know.
    Thank you for your comment. It really does make my day. I'm glad this makes your day as much as your comment makes mine. Cute
    April 6th, 2015 at 08:27pm
  • vinuushka

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    the more we know about blaze, the sadder i get. like really, how much are you gonna make him go through?

    i actually think that i should say this; whenever i see that this story have a new update i get so fraking happy. - it makes my day, i guess? so keep up the good work, because this is amazing.
    April 6th, 2015 at 06:41pm
  • FearTheMotionless

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    Time to bring out Sassy Colt.
    I just love how their personalities switch a little when they get to Colt's parents house.
    And the dad! "I just knew." OMF I love him haha
    March 21st, 2015 at 02:20am
  • Corrupt_Perfection

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    Everything about this story is just super fantastic.
    March 19th, 2015 at 04:05am
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    @ FearTheMotionless
    I actually got so exhausted when Colton tried to pick a fight. And literally, Blaze wanted to be yelled at, but the fights weren't speaking to me. I mean, until I wrote it like this. With happiness and getting that humans are not perfect. So I hope it fit within their natures....
    March 14th, 2015 at 02:42am
  • FearTheMotionless

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    *standing ovation for Colton*
    *high fives Blaze*

    YOU JUST GOT BURNED, COACH!
    (Even though he slightly makes up for it by being a nice, ridiculous drunk. Slightly)

    And OMF there was no fighting!
    Just happiness and understanding and the cuteness that is Colton and Blaze's relationship! <3

    I'm glad you're back, by the way. Hope everything is well, lovely. <3 >w<
    March 14th, 2015 at 02:00am
  • A. J.

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    Thanks for posting!!! I'm so happy another chapter is up because I missed this story.
    Colton really handled everything so well here. He reacted levelheaded where sometimes he can be hard on himself, Blaze and others around him. happy to see a little bit of Evan too. I really like the last paragraph. Blaze is so wise at times and like Colton said- impulsive. I like him and his complexity.
    March 10th, 2015 at 07:52pm
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    @ Corrupt_Perfection
    Well, I'm glad to see someone was reading this! And I wished that worked for my subscriptions too, lol.
    March 10th, 2015 at 05:12pm
  • Corrupt_Perfection

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    Alright, this is so weird. I had this feeling that if I read this story again it would update. This idea occurred sometime in the afternoon, and I was reading this off and on for a while today. I was around chapter 11 when I checked my email and found that this had updated. If only this feeling worked on other stories too. I am so glad that it works on this one though.
    March 10th, 2015 at 09:47am
  • Don'tFearTheReaper

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    @ FearTheMotionless
    Haha, thank you for the welcome party, lol. I'm really happy that you enjoyed this update. It was so raw for me. Gah! I really want some Blaze snuggles. They're always really warm in inviting.... Maybe I want my characters to be real people, because I'm in love with Blaze and Colt. One thing, I didn't know Coach had a last name... Did I accidentally mention one? But thank you so much for your support. I've missed being here. And it's nice to know what other's think of the story. (It's getting draw out because I can't face my fears... lol!)
    February 15th, 2015 at 06:37am