Twelve Days - Comments

@ chynnablueink
THANK YOUUU IM GLAD YOU LIKE IT AND I HOPE YOU LIKE THE SEQUEL :DDD

I should be working. I just sat and read this whole thing instead. I FREAKING LOVE IT, MAN. Kick ass ending. SO glad there's a sequel.

@ sodapop curtis
She is going to be terrifying and I'm excited Pete obviously had to be the asshole since he was acting strange for the last few days and he didn't want her to meet Bronx. He's in love with her but not ready for everything to spiral out of control, you know? He kind of wants to stop himself before he goes to far. But whether or not that's fair to Marsha is another question that he'll address in the next story! I'm really glad you liked it though

@ birds ate my face
I know, Pete's an idiot, and he'll realize it in our next installment, haha. I think everyone's pissed at Pete, I know I am!

Oh my god, I'm pissed! What the heck was he thinking?!??? Ugh, i so wanted them together :( but hey it was a great little twist, was not expecting that!

Oh SHIT. I knew something big was coming and I was not disappointed. It was fitting because anyone with eyes could tell that no matter how hard they tried to fight it, both their insecurities would get in the way sooner or later. (In this case, it happened to be Pete's that won the race.) With that being said, I'm still mad at him for just dropping her like that

But oh my god that ending left me so on edge and now I'm really excited for the sequel but also really nervous because Corporate Executive Bitch Marsha sounds terrifying yet fucking awesome and I can't wait to see how everything's going to get flipped around.

@ sodapop curtis
Thanks bb! I had a great day!! :D And I love that you love my dialogue. And yeah, they're both consumed with love but I think in the next chapter we're going to see that Pete isn't as unaware of the risks as we (and Marsha) think he is!

@ birds ate my face
I'm so sad this is almost over. I'm so bad at finishing stories, so it'll be a great accomplishment for me to finish this!!

@ AirickuhMeuh
Aw, I'm glad you like the updates (even though this past one was like two weeks later :O ) there will be a sequel don't worry, I've already started it! And yeah, that's why I thought having Patrick in this was good because Marsha can reveal more about herself.

Oh yeah and happy birthday!! Have fun celebrating gurl (I have no idea why I put that smiley but I've always wanted to use it)

"Sometimes we're all kinda insane." Ah I loved that line. You write such simple dialogue, but somehow it's always exactly what needs to be said.

Also I loved the part where you said Pete's eyes were youthful because that's the most accurate way to describe him. Always a kid at heart, that Wentz.

One last thing: "I'm afraid it's going to be an ever ensuing battle between two opposite forces that may never meet." Damn. I mean, really, wow. That's fucking heavy. It's like Pete and Marsha are so consumed with love that it's blinding them and they don't realize that sooner or later they're going to crash and burn. Oh man. Damn you for making me have feelings

Oh man I don't know what to say I'm excited and super nervous and sad that its almost over

I love the updates coming in, but they make me so nervous knowing it's coming to the end. I can just hope for a wonderful sequel haha I don't know what I love so much about this but I just love their relationship. I feel like they are so cute and innocent together, but still have their own pasts. Like you mentioned in the previous chapter when Patrick is getting to know Marsh, Pete doesn't know much about her, they just have a clean little relationship

SO ready for a sequel. You know I can't get enough of that Peter Lewis shit eating grin. Ooh also I loved the line, "You look like a sunflower", that was so cute oh my gosh.

Yes make a sequel! I don't want their relationship to stop at 12!

@ sodapop curtis
I know, I'm going to be sad too!! Like I said, though, I haven't really picked a direction--whether it will go rocky or smooth, but I'm planning a sequel!

Ahhh nooo only three more chapters I'm gonna be so sad when it's over, especially if things are about to get rocky. This is one of my favorites stories on here.

@ Ali Cat
I know exactly what you mean! After growing up reading his lyrics and journal posts and hearing him talk in interviews and stuff and even in person, I feel like I know the kinds of things he might say as well. He's such an interesting person to write about, honestly

@ AirickuhMeuh
Eek, thank you! I hope to get this story finished soon! There's so many ways it could go!

@ sodapop curtis
Thank you so much, it really means a lot! I saw this past chapter as a real defining moment for Pete. I love writing him, and this was such a hard part to write, because this part of his life is something that was real, and nobody knows how it really went, so I'm allowed to fabricate my own kind of story behind it, so I'm glad that you really liked that dialogue that I had for him. I just really love writing Pete because (I like to think) I kind of get how he'd say it, you know? I dunno, I've talked to him several times so that helps. It's really cool to be able to write this and think about how he'd say it. I'm really flattered that you liked that part. Thanks so much

Oh these updates are lovely, and dear god a sequel would be the best thing ever, I just don't want this to end lol

I was halfway through this chapter when I realized I hadn't read the one before it so I went back and omg that was heartbreaking. I love the parallels between Marsha's current "unlovable" mindset and how Pete felt when he was in his 20's.

Also, "I married her like I was supposed to. I treated her like a fucking queen. She ripped my heart out. And you say you don't want to fuck it up, but you don't even know what it means to fuck up." Oh my gosh I LOVED that part. You just really have a knack for writing dialogue.

As far as how I want this to end, I have no idea. The most realistic scenario I keep picturing in my head is just them drifting apart after the twelfth day and then maybe one day meeting each other again in the future and starting this whole cycle over again. Or maybe just running off together away from all their friends and responsibilities.

@ birds ate my face
I don't want it to end either :( I had a good ending planned but I fell too far in love with it and with Pete and Marsha to go through with it, you know? I can't believe I stayed up so late to write another chapter oh my god. That's how much I love them!

I love this chapter!! It makes me wanna know more about Marsha's life before meeting Pete; honestly never want this to end