Twelve Days - Comments

@ AirickuhMeuh
Wow thank you so much :D I really enjoy getting comments, it means a lot! I'm working on an update for you right now just because your comment made my day! I think I have an idea of where I want this to end, but I'm not exactly sure, so we'll see!

I always look forward to this update, it kinda saddens me that i assume there is only going to be 12 chapters, I don't know where you are going to go with this, and it's halfway done! I want this story to last forever

@ birds ate my face
Thanks! I really liked writing this one

Aww that was so cute!!

@ sodapop curtis
Thanks! I really like this story, it's kinda different for me in a way because it has no real plot and because of the narration. But I'm glad people actually like it!

As for this damn burn, it really hurts! What's the worst is that it's in such a sensitive area. I was reaching over my oven into a cabinet and I didn't know it had been turned on, and my shirt lifted up and my hip touched the outside of the oven and just completely seared that bit of skin. It's just this reddish/purple strip of skin that's like four inches long that hurts soooo badly. I actually had to go to the doctor because it was so painful and I was afraid of it getting infected. After some prescription painkillers and ointment and bandages I'm up and running, haha, but they said it'll take a while for it to go away because of the area since it's right on my waistline where most of my pants come up to. So yeah, it's a bummer and nasty

Drabbles are my favorite, maybe that's why I like this story so much. It just kind of...flows. It doesn't have to be concrete in order to tell a story.

Ooh, that burn sounds awful, though My friend got a second degree burn on her arm from a tea kettle once and it took forever to heal. They can get pretty nasty.

@ birds ate my face
I know, damn Pete! But that's how some people are. That's how I picture him being I don't know why. Maybe not so much anymore but when he didn't have his emotions under control definitely and I could see it even durin the hiatus but I dunno. And who knows how long Marsha will deal for :O

Pete and his mood swings...at least Marsha can deal

I loved it, I don't even know what to say, it's sweet :)

@ sodapop curtis
Thanks so much! I know, there's just something about this story. I like that you said it makes it seem magical, because that's the perfect word for it, I think. There's something about their romance that's so unrealistic I think that makes it more mystical. I can't describe it but I had the urge to write it and the style's so weird I wouldn't usually write something like this but everyone seems to think it works! I'm glad you think so too!

i looove the way you write. this story is so simple, yet you make it seem some kind of magical.

@ lady_enigma
Thanks :) It's just so hard to make them any longer because I don't want to be like William Beckett and go into so much detail it's borderline overkill, and there's only so much I can write for a one-day span per chapter. I'm glad you think it's okay!

@ tabula rasa.
Thanks! I'm glad everyone is happy with the length because I don't even know how to make it longer. And I enjoy it too even though Marsha is reluctant and Pete doesn't give a shit. I guess we'll just have to wait and see what happens next! :D

Just got caught up with this! And I think the length of the chapter's is fine! I really enjoy Pete and Marsha's relationship right now. Can't wait to see where this goes!

Dont be unhappy with the chapter length they're fine

@ ChampagneSupernova
Omg he's so perf and idk if I can stand getting his heart broken I'm conflicted because he's so sfkjsgns';

Pete makes me sad bc he's so perf ):

@ birds ate my face
so in love with the fact that you respond so quickly to my stories and we have the same name ;D i just love Pete in this idek

So in love with your imagine of Pete, i'm such a weirdo

@ AliSaysRoar
Go with the flow, just remember why you started to write that way in the first place it'll get better, it's already great as it is

@ birds ate my face
I know, there's just something SO sexy about addressing him directly in the description of everything going on, I don't even know. And I just feel like it's too short, but then again there's only so much I can say because it's day by day, whereas in another story I can do several days/weeks at a time to give a chapter more substance. It just gets tiring writing with this form of narration, as I'm sure it gets tiring to read sometimes. I dunno. I'm a little unhappy with the length of the chapters but I'll see what happens