Twelve Days - Comments

Dude you make Pete sound so hot from a your perspective! I love it and I'm so curious on how it'll end; I'm not sure what I'd like to see, I'm happy just to read how you describe Pete

@ lady_enigma
Oh my goodness it is like Gray isn't it? I fucking love that book and that man, haha. Thank you

I like how its narrated. It reminds me of Gray lol. Its a good strong start

@ birds ate my face
I don't think comments suck ever. A comment is better than none at all and I'm grateful that you always comment on my stuff

@ tabula rasa.
Eek I'm glad you like it! I know, I thought the narration would be cool but I have to work on it because it gets a little annoying to read. But practice makes perfect, right? :D

I love this. I really like the way that this is narrated. It's different, but it works!

@ AliSaysRoar
Yeah it's great! I suck at like commenting, I only think, "holy crap this is awesome"

@ birds ate my face
You like it?! It's okay?! I don't suck for once?! I don't know where this idea came from but I'm running with it because I find this kind of narration fascinating but sometimes it gets to be tiring. Idek man I'm glad you like it though

This is awesome