The Cabin - Comments

Johnny

And poor Jimmy! He's feeling guilty and I think all this death and bloodshed has caused him to break away from reality. He needs to listen to Brian and Matt, but I do understand his desire for revenge. I just hope that he gets her before she gets him...that bitch has it coming!

My poor babies

This is exactly what she wants them to do, she wants them so paranoid that all rational thinking flies out of the window and they slowly go insane. She's picking them off one by one, I really hope one of them catches her and kills her!

Can't say I blame them, though. Their best friends are slowly dying around them, they're like sitting ducks

My poor babies

This is exactly what she wants them to do, she wants them so paranoid that all rational thinking flies out of the window and they slowly go insane. She's picking them off one by one, I really hope one of them catches her and kills her!

Poor Jimmy I can't blame him for reacting that way, he's terrified of losing all of his friends, of course, but even more terrified of losing the man he loves. How in the world could he just sit there and listen to Johnny predict his own death and say nothing? I really really hope that Johnny is wrong. *fingers crossed*

@ Mrs. McCarron
I can pussyfoot around gore, at all. I love writing horror stories involving gore, and I'd feel like I'm cheating myself if I don't add it haha... and you're correct, yes. She knows all the ways into the house, which is how she'll get the remaining. Brian was telling the truth about what happened between the bitch and him also.

Okay, first off, I'm loving that this is a bloody horror story that doesn't pussyfoot around the gore. I mean, these deaths are increasingly gruesome, and it is great. I felt sorry for both girls. One thing I am wondering, though: if they found Riley in the bathtub, does that mean the killer was able to get into the house before they got super scared and started locking everything?

I can't even talk about Zacky's death. They let him go, and they shouldn't have, and the guilt is obviously eating away at Johnny. But Zack is to blame, too. He knew what was at risk, even when doing something as simple as stepping out for a cigarette. Still...his death made my heart hurt a little.

I'm so curious as to what exactly the link is. Little clues that point to something besides Brian, maybe? He's the obvious one to blame, despite how Zack kept blaming Matt. And I want to know if Brian was telling the truth about what happened between him and this girl, or if there's some other reason why she's hunting them.

well, first of, I'm sorry I haven't commented all the other chapters... I've been trying to comment most stories I read, but uni got in the middle of that plan...
Anyway, Zacky's death was just... sad and gruesome... but yeah, no one told him to go outside alone just because he was upset...
About this chapter: poor Johnny He really took Zacky's death the hardest... and he may very well be next, because of it...
And, finally the guys decided to stick together at all times! and again, sexy times on weird moments... although, if they're gonna die anyway, let them have some fun first

@ Synful Cocktail
Sounds like a lovely girl. hahaha

Double-post

I'm so glad nobody died in this chapter. I know eventually that's how they're going to end up, but it was nice to see them having a bit of a breather. As far as predictions, I think Jimmy'll be next. She'll catch him off-guard somehow, but this will make Johnny more inconsolable that he already is, making him a super easy target for her.

One slightly nit-picky thing : I think the 3rd paragraph from the bottom needs to be split into 2 sentences instead of just being one long one, with the second sentence starting in the shower.

@ rachthebat.
She's got it all planned out. Turn psychopathic, she's named people who she'll kill and how they'll be killed. She's ridiculous, hence why she and I get along so well.

@ Synful Cocktail
I love that she knows she's gonna turn into a cannibal forward thinking, I like it. XD

@ rachthebat.
Oh, I shall. Why yes, I shall make it habitable for you, maybe clean up a bit. Oh, I wouldn't mind, it's me. My best friend has already said that when she turns cannibal, I'll be her human food source.

@ Synful Cocktail
*bats away story ideas* Don't mind me, you carry on. I'll just be here with my feet up, having a cup of tea and munching on your boobs. That didn't sound perverted or slightly cannibalistic at all, though.

@ rachthebat.
Oh I bet, there's a multitude of fandoms up here to keep you company, be mindful again of all the rampant story ideas that are floating disjointed. XD

@ Synful Cocktail
Yummy *steps over chocolate covered, tea smelling, boobs* Kinda cozy in here. XD

@ rachthebat.
It's also extremely filthy and horridly dirty. Be mindful of the chocolate covered, tea smelling-like boobs that are all over the place hahaha.

@ Synful Cocktail
Mwahahahahaha! It's nice and warm in here, though.

@ rachthebat.
Get out of my head, woman. Goddamn.

@ rachthebat.
Get out of my head, woman. Goddamn.