The Cabin - Comments

My poor babies

It's a good idea, there are strength in numbers. But I just can't help but think that one of them will slip up and get separated from the group. And I think that person might be Johnny D: He's already paranoid after discovering Zack (still not okay with that, by the way XD) so his head isn't in the right place. With Johnny gone, Jimmy will go nuts and, I think, go after her and then ultimately, get himself killed.

Which will leave just Brian and Matt to fend off the she devil.

Ugh, poor Zacky. I had hoped it wouldn't be him, but going outside alone when a killer is lurking is just a bad idea. Especially at night.

I noticed the pattern, but thought I was reading into things too much, but now I'm curious if my reasoning why is correct or not.

As far as who goes next, my money is on Johnny. Not that I want it to be him, but I'm assuming she'll save Matt/Brian for the end, and Jimmy'll just go all ninja on her ass if she tried to get him now, but if she waits until he's sad about Johnny's demise, she'll have a better chance at surprising him and taking him down.

I LEGIT JUST SPAT CEREAL BAR ALL OVER MY SCREEN! My poor sweet, innocent, nerdy Zachary! *wails* I can't even hug him cause he's cut in half!

Part of me is so sad that it was Zack, and the way they found out, by literally running his blood down the drain. But the other part of me, thinks the way he died is so freakin cool! I clearly have issues

I didn't even spot the pattern, either, I'm losing my touch. I do however, have a theory about why the bitch is choosing water. But I think it's a little inappropriate - considering Zacky's demise - so I'll keep it to myself XD

Let's all take a minute's silence for the Vengeance man, and pray that the others make it out alive!

Omg, I have this image in my head of Zack lying there, puffing and panting while Johnny and Matt try to calm him down

“So, this chick is pissed because she didn’t get her pussy wet?” Dear lord, Johnny!

Oh Zack, we know you're scared but being an asshole will get you nowhere! Do I have to march on into this story and tan your backside, young man? Cause I will!

You know, I think I will jump into this story, just to punch Zack in the face! There's a she-devil outside, gunning for your blood, and you decide now would be a good time to go outside for a smoke. Alone. Did watching Supernatural teach you nothing, boy! Jesus!

there's a weapon wielding maniac outside, but what do Matt and Brian decide to do? Bump uglies. Nice timing, boys Although, to be fair, if I thought that I was gonna be murdered by some bunny boiler, I would probably have sex with Matt, too. XD

I still say it's either Jimmy or Johnny. Zack would be too easy now that he's gone outside alone. But I could be wrong, she might just pick him off as an easy kill.

MORE SOON PLEASE MADAM!

Zacky was a bit of an asshole, even if I understand that he's scared... also, what happened to not going outside alone???
Brian shouldn't take what a scared Zacky says too seriously... and as much as i find Brian and Matt's relationship cute and adorable... they have a serial killer outside their door; it's no time for sexy bussiness

Ya know, I thought I had this sorta figured out, but then I just read Rach's idea and it makes sense, too. At this point, I have no idea who will be next because I can think of a few different scenarios that could be plausible. Hell, she could kidnap Brian and make him choose who dies next and/or make him help with those that mean the most to him since she wants to hurt him so badly. And now I feel like I watch too many cop/serial killer shows in tv.

Awww, poor Zack! He has every right to be scared though, there's a she-maniac out there, picking them off one by one! I can see his reasoning in thinking he would probably be the next one! The girls were alone when they were taken.

you’ve got brute-for-brains over there to protect you and vice versa This made me laugh, though, hahaha. I love Zack, I hope he's not next! If I'm right, then it'll either be Jimmy or Johnny next, then Zack, then Matt. The killer will want to hurt Brian, so she'll take away those that matter to him last.

OHMYGAWDSHE'SOUTISDIEHOLYSHIT! Run for your lives, boys!

I hate that you ended it there! Poor Zack :( I'd be terrified if I were in his position as well. But, it would seem like if she is really trying to hurt Brian, she'd go after Matt next since they are newly coupled, regardless of the fact that Z is essentially the fifth wheel now, and doesn't always have someone with him.

I had forgotten about this story, but I'm all caught up now. I can't believe I'm saying this, but Johnny is being the sensible one and they all need to listen to him. Looking forward to more!

I love you too

No no no no, they can't have Zacky or Matt! I won't let her! For once, Johnny is the voice of reason. They need to stick together and fight the bitch!

Can't wait for the next one!

Poor Riley D: I don't think she did that to herself though. Oh no, psycho killer is on the loose! Johnny's right, they need to stick together before they get picked off one by one!

Also, Jimmy is awesome.

Any excuse to sneak in some Bratt.. hahaha. I'm not complaining, though.

It is pretty damn good, sistah! :D I don't think the others are going to be so happy with them, though. But hey, there's a crazy killer on the loose, why not get in some sexy time while you still can! XD

More soon, please! :D

Holy shit, impaled on a pole? That's gotta suck. As ways to die go, that wouldn't be the top of my list.

Not great timing, but it's not Brian's fault that she's dead. Come on, Riley, use your nogin. He couldn't have predicted what would happen. I wonder who will be next...eeeeep!

oh my lord, I LOVE ZACKY!

The fandom references, "stunned fucking mullet", "uncultured dick socket" LOL!

THEY KISSED!

I think this is probably my favourite chapter so far! And I've just realised I need to read chapter 6 too.

I'm giggling away at the image of a bird smacking into the window, lolplol.

Of course Jimmy would be bending Johnny over in the kitchen, bahaha!

I think I love Zack even more knowing he gets so hyper on sweets, haha. Man after my own heart!

“My baby’s so smart!” Jimmy wailed Makes me laugh and equal parts swoon too

Oh my Johnny Christ potatoes, what did they find?!?! Me thinks that Evelyn is a gonner D:

MORE SOON!

One thing I have to say is 'tyres' should be 'tires'. :p

You've got a great descriptive voice like seriously, that first paragraph of the first chapter is really wonderfully done. I seriously enjoyed reading it. I always enjoy a good cabin in the woods scenario they're so cliche but so great at the same time. Seriously, very nicely done. :)

So much angst, my heart cannot take it! Loved it, very much looking forward to seeing what happens between them when they have to share a bed!

You're on a roll! :D

Dun Dun Duuuuuun! Now we're getting to the meat and potatoes! XD

Oh my god, the image of Brian yielding a lamp as a weapon, made me laugh! Hahaha. I love that Zacky makes Harry Potter references ^_^ Of course you wouldn't want to drink the goblin piss, it's nasty!

I love Jimmy!! But you already knew that hehe. Can't wait to read more! More Bratty angst please!

Also, can I have some of your magical tea please? XD

I love this!

I SMELL BRATT!!

"What the fuck are you doing? Digging to China?" Oh the lols!

Another great update :D I can't wait for that sexual tension to bubble over and Matt fucks the life out of Brian. Please? XD

More please!

Eeeeep, it's alive!

I love it! I love that Brian is basically a whore who will sleep with anyone I love how, underneath the bravado and muscle, Matt is just a pouty teenager haha. Knowing where this is heading, I can't wait for more!